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On the Air Balloon

Up on the windswept vale
Touching the elusive rainbow
Gliding with eagles

The dark gale with fury blew
Air balloon danced, swept down
A tangle of strings

Copyright © Tahera Mannan | Year Posted 2010

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 1/14/2011 3:59:00 AM Congratulations Tahera on your win in SKAT*'s contest "Air Balloon Ride". Love, Carol Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 1/10/2011 10:42:00 PM Congratulations Tahera on your big win in this Haiku contest of SKAT! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/10/2011 5:41:00 PM Tahera,, Congratulations in the contest. enjoyed,..p.d. Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 1/10/2011 2:48:00 PM Congrats Tahera on your great write and win!!! love Michael Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 1/10/2011 11:27:00 AM Congratulation's Tahera on your fine win in Skat's contest, lovely Haiku....:) Login to Reply

Daniel Cwiak Date: 1/10/2011 10:08:00 AM Wonderful write, Tahera. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/10/2011 8:21:00 AM Congratulations on your win with this great work..Sara Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 1/10/2011 7:35:00 AM Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Skat, Tahera Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/10/2011 7:12:00 AM Tahera, I love the visual you create with your two haiku. First up and then down. REally cool. Congratulations! Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 1/10/2011 2:41:00 AM Great one Tahera, congratulations on your win in Irma's contest ;-) WN Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 1/10/2011 12:08:00 AM sooo good, this one tahera.. congrats for the high win in the contest..:) nette Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/9/2011 11:39:00 PM Congrats Tahera my friend on your super success in Irma's hot air balloon contest with this magical ride luv.. enjoy another high flying victory with luv.. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 1/9/2011 10:05:00 PM TAHERA, CONGRATULATIONS!! ON YOUR WONDERFUL HOT AIR-BALLOON RIDE. HAD LOTS OF FUN READING EVERY ENTRY. THANK YOU~SKAT Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/6/2010 10:31:00 PM Excellent haiku duo here, Tahera. Sure to score high! Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 12/6/2010 12:18:00 PM Perfect imagery in your wonderful Haiku, Tahera! Love, Audrey Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 12/6/2010 7:54:00 AM Nice haiku with great images, Tahera. Good luck Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 12/6/2010 6:47:00 AM A vivid image you have painted to share with us, Tahera. We have all seen balloons getting tossed and tangled in wind, but you describe it so well! Great poem, my friend. Peace and blessings, Carolyn Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/6/2010 3:20:00 AM Went on the ride with you..Very descriptive..Good one..Thanks for taking me there..I was delighted that you stopped by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 12/6/2010 12:42:00 AM excellent good luck in contest. enjoyed these. Harry Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/5/2010 10:02:00 PM Now that was fast i just saw the contest in,.. ouch! on your second haiku,, the best of luck,..p.d. Login to Reply