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On the Air Balloon

Up on the windswept vale Touching the elusive rainbow Gliding with eagles The dark gale with fury blew Air balloon danced, swept down A tangle of strings

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/14/2011 3:59:00 AM

Congratulations Tahera on your win in SKAT*'s contest "Air Balloon Ride". Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 1/10/2011 10:42:00 PM

Congratulations Tahera on your big win in this Haiku contest of SKAT!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/10/2011 5:41:00 PM

Tahera,, Congratulations in the contest. enjoyed,..p.d.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/10/2011 2:48:00 PM

Congrats Tahera on your great write and win!!! love Michael

James Fraser

Date: 1/10/2011 11:27:00 AM

Congratulation's Tahera on your fine win in Skat's contest, lovely Haiku....:)

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 1/10/2011 10:08:00 AM

Wonderful write, Tahera. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/10/2011 8:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this great work..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/10/2011 7:35:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Skat, Tahera

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2011 7:12:00 AM

Tahera, I love the visual you create with your two haiku. First up and then down. REally cool. Congratulations!

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/10/2011 2:41:00 AM

Great one Tahera, congratulations on your win in Irma's contest ;-) WN

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/10/2011 12:08:00 AM

sooo good, this one tahera.. congrats for the high win in the contest..:) nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/9/2011 11:39:00 PM

Congrats Tahera my friend on your super success in Irma's hot air balloon contest with this magical ride luv.. enjoy another high flying victory with luv..

Skat A

Date: 1/9/2011 10:05:00 PM

TAHERA, CONGRATULATIONS!! ON YOUR WONDERFUL HOT AIR-BALLOON RIDE. HAD LOTS OF FUN READING EVERY ENTRY. THANK YOU~SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2010 10:31:00 PM

Excellent haiku duo here, Tahera. Sure to score high!

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/6/2010 12:18:00 PM

Perfect imagery in your wonderful Haiku, Tahera! Love, Audrey

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/6/2010 7:54:00 AM

Nice haiku with great images, Tahera. Good luck

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/6/2010 6:47:00 AM

A vivid image you have painted to share with us, Tahera. We have all seen balloons getting tossed and tangled in wind, but you describe it so well! Great poem, my friend. Peace and blessings, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/6/2010 3:20:00 AM

Went on the ride with you..Very descriptive..Good one..Thanks for taking me there..I was delighted that you stopped by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/6/2010 12:42:00 AM

excellent good luck in contest. enjoyed these. Harry

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/5/2010 10:02:00 PM

Now that was fast i just saw the contest in,.. ouch! on your second haiku,, the best of luck,..p.d.