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On the 4th Day of Feb

For several years her incredible talent I looked upon with awe As gradually across the sea we felt a bond both her and me We felt a true affinity As if somehow we’d met before Over the years with laughter and tears Good friends we had become I knew from her writing when she was in pain I sent virtual hugs again and again Across many oceans went love to and fro Us two had not met Us two had not spoken and yet when lately my soul felt so low Nowhere was there solace Nowhere for to go But my soul sis she felt it My soul sis did know And today was the day On the 4th day of Feb We picked up our phones We were speaking instead Arriving together in each other’s home To hear her sweet voice how it lifted me so Like she was nearby A tear fell from my eye As now we feel closer than ever before Who knows what comes next ~~~~ Who’s a knocking at my door?
Written 4th February 2021 Contest ALL YOURS (FEB 5) N/A Judged 6th Feb 2021 Contest Name NA Poem From a February 2021 Judged Contest Sponsor Constance La France FIRST PLACE

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Date: 3/19/2021 11:00:00 AM
Ann, congratulations on your win in my NA Poem From a Contest Judged in Feb 2021. I love this poem, well done _Constance
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/20/2021 2:03:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Constance for my win in your contest and so happy that you loved it. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/18/2021 12:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Hugs
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/19/2021 3:43:00 AM
Bless you and thank you Eve. I hope you are well. With kindest thoughts Ann
Date: 3/18/2021 10:36:00 AM
Ann, congratulations on your first place win! Love the simple formatting of the poem. Your words so beautifully describe the joy of a friendship nurtured over time and treasured like a fine wine. A beautiful tribute. How wonderful that you and Line connected over the phone! All the best blessings to you.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/19/2021 3:41:00 AM
Yes it was joyous when we spoke for the first time and I went straight onto my computer and put down my feeling's. Thank you dearest Sam for your congrats and compliments. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/6/2021 6:40:00 PM
Hi Ann~ This poem is just lovely, as are you. I got to speak to one poetess here. What a cool experience. Gla you connected! Hugs. Panagiota and ^*^ She's taking her afternoon siesta.)!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/7/2021 1:48:00 PM
Hi Panagiota and sweet Irene,I am so pleased you liked my poem, even though I had 76 views, you sweet friend are the only person to comment! But hey ho I wrote it because of the joy I felt after speaking to dearest Line, it was such a joy to hear her voice, as we have become great friends over the years, but had never actually spoken, and it was her that made me feel I should try to write again. Thank you for your loyalty and friendship too. With love and hugs Ann xx

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