On the 4th

Went for a hike at a nature preserve 
And followed the trail with each lake-hugging curve.
The sun dappled through as it lit up the trees
As we stepped over roots, not once skinning our knees.

We stopped at the Center as we headed out
And met Tin Tin the tortoise, who ambled about.
Then we headed to Ralph’s for some ices to eat;
With so many cool flavors, it sure was a treat.

Though I know it’s the 4th, I don’t need a parade 
Or a barbecue chef with the burgers he’s made
Or the fireworks I’ll be too tired to see
To know this was a day close to perfect for me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 7/6/2024 8:41:00 PM
Amen! Sounds perfect to me too. A pleasure to read this, Ilene. :) gw
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Date: 7/6/2024 2:30:00 AM
the famous fourth, you really took a good moment and memories, enjoyed your poem Ilene
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Date: 7/5/2024 12:39:00 PM
Your poem glows with contentment of a simple life. It is positively beautiful.
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Date: 7/4/2024 11:20:00 PM
Sounds like you had a great 4th amoung the beauty of nature! I enjoyed your poem!
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Date: 7/4/2024 6:36:00 PM
Sounds like a perfect day, Ilene. Wish I could have days like that, but my legs aren't as eager or limber like they used to be. I'm not a big 4th of July celebrator – too noisy at my age. A quiet evening with a glass of wine suits me better. Enjoyed your poem. / Maurice
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Date: 7/4/2024 1:17:00 PM
Sounds like a pleasant day well spent. I love the rhymes here and the descriptive nature of your word weaving. happy fourth of july to you.
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 7/4/2024 1:30:00 PM
Same to you, Ink Empress! Thanks for stopping by…
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