On That One Special Moment

The midnight sun 
and the midday moon
soon scurried 
across the purple sky
searching for you
and our ill fated love

You left that sweaty night
and I haven’t seen you since
I felt we were one
I know you felt it too

I guess some loves can't be kept
Loving moments in time and space
dissolve hearts looking for honesty
As the lovelorn do

It was that one special moment
That one time, that sweaty space
Where we found each other 
And I lost you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Chircop Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 2:42 PM
Sometimes it takes the loss of a cherished one...to learn to appreciate more who is to follow ..after her.Your poem feels so real..Awesome.
Cisneros Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 2:59 PM
Charmaine, you spoil me, thank you from the deepest part of my heart.
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