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On That One Special Moment

The midnight sun and the midday moon soon scurried across the purple sky searching for you and our ill fated love You left that sweaty night and I haven’t seen you since I felt we were one I know you felt it too I guess some loves can't be kept Loving moments in time and space dissolve hearts looking for honesty As the lovelorn do It was that one special moment That one time, that sweaty space Where we found each other And I lost you

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Date: 7/18/2018 2:42:00 PM
Sometimes it takes the loss of a cherished one...to learn to appreciate more who is to follow ..after her.Your poem feels so real..Awesome.
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Norberto Franco Cisneros
Date: 7/18/2018 2:59:00 PM
Charmaine, you spoil me, thank you from the deepest part of my heart.

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