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On That Note

Two tales of note regarding notes: I watched my grandson’s band And thought it was amazing, so To take those thoughts in hand I sent a little email To the teacher, so she’d know She deserved appreciation For a well-delivered show. She responded right away and seemed Delighted I’d reached out. A little note can lift one like A whisper, not a shout. The second note was written by A doctor who’d not shown For an early-morn appointment (And his office didn’t phone). The note was an apology; He had a touch of flu His toddler twins had passed to him, As children often do. That correspondence made me think That notes, today so rare, Don’t take a lot of effort But let people know you care.

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Date: 6/4/2023 7:42:00 PM
You have hit the spot here, ilene. Just a little note, like an actual phone call, can mean so, so much! ... Back in 2006, I was luck enough to start a 5-year run in a school whose principal had a great idea: Send 'good notes' home to the parents -- who are so used to getting 'bad notes' to come in for a 'conference' or something. It really worked. I've been sending 'good notes,' ever since. Thanks, ilene, and thanks Rabbi Eliyahu Millen!
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Date: 6/3/2023 7:09:00 PM
Yes. A simple few words sent any way at all are almost universally appreciated.
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Date: 6/3/2023 4:01:00 AM
Just a few lines can mean so much Ilene, got to admit I e mail/ send wattsapp messages rather than write a letter - i used to have so many pen pals in my youth - how things have changed and not for the better:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/3/2023 12:21:00 AM
A note is much more personal than a text or email. Sadly letters and notes are dying out. Tom
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Date: 6/2/2023 10:30:00 PM
Ilene l totally agree….its things like notes, thankyou, are you ok?, a kind gesture etc that really matter. Love the way you think and love this poem! Debx
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Date: 6/2/2023 3:57:00 PM
Totally agree, Ilene. Alas, when I view Facebook I fear that the apparent dyslexia displayed by so many would, with paper and ink, prove to be a near epidemic…. Note to self… write more positive comments! ;-)
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Date: 6/2/2023 2:38:00 PM
A lost art to many, Ilene. I enjoyed your thoughts on notes. Thanks for sharing, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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