On That Dark Alley

On that dark alley, the wind whispered Listen, it said, I am the bringer of news Goosebumps on my arms, I stood and heard This creepy voice and looked for signs of cues None came except this cold voice, so angered! That dark night, I shook with fright Yet obedient, I gave the wind my audience I am sick, it said, sick of this birthright You humans, have taken to abhorrence Look at the plight of this providence! Pollution, everywhere and anywhere Nowhere, can I flow as free as air Nor can I breathe purity Nor can I sense chastity What has happened to humanity? As the wind lamented, my fright disappeared It shook and pity overwhelmed my heart But the wind talked once more, as I feared I shall bring forth destruction and down shall be those smart Those who think the world is made up of their sole part! Be prepared, it continued, be prepared for the havoc The world should be cleaned in each block I shall do so via a shock The time shall come with the clock Be prepared for the rejuvenation! On that dark alley, my blood turned cold And my heart for my likes become hard Even if with love and care it is mould I pray for the coming of the Bard The one to cure the world of this negativity!
Placed 3rd in the contest.... :)
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Brown Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 5:58 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Dungeon"contest Anoucheka. Love, Carol
Gangabissoon Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 3:25 AM
:) Thk You so much everyone! :)
Williams Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 3:04 AM
Anoucheka congrats on your win, love it..David
Guzzi Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 3:29 PM
Hello fine new poet friend what a master word smith you are, just loved the topic and the personification. Congrad's on your fine verse winning big! Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 10:03 AM
Big congratulations on your win. I love the line praying for the coming of the Bard!
Sweetheart Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 7:33 AM
congrats Anoucheka on a superb write and win for this wonderful entry luv.. captivating tale..
Palmer Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 9:46 PM
nice write Anoucheka
Situation Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 6:59 PM
funny you should ask.
Gangabissoon Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 10:42 PM
ur opinion....:)
Guzzi Avatar
July 15, 2012 at 12:23 PM
Please list this as Verse, or Rhyme for a Quatrain has 4 lines ;)..you could even list it as Personification because you are making the wind talk! Thanks for the entry Light & Love
Gangabissoon Avatar
July 15, 2012 at 9:17 PM
oops thks meant to list it as Quintain...! Listed it as rhyme finally!!
May Avatar
July 15, 2012 at 12:16 PM
the answer is blowing in the wind Anoucheka...enjoyed...Joseph
Gangabissoon Avatar
July 15, 2012 at 9:17 PM
thks to you! :)
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