On That Dark Alley

On that dark alley, the wind whispered Listen, it said, I am the bringer of news Goosebumps on my arms, I stood and heard This creepy voice and looked for signs of cues None came except this cold voice, so angered! That dark night, I shook with fright Yet obedient, I gave the wind my audience I am sick, it said, sick of this birthright You humans, have taken to abhorrence Look at the plight of this providence! Pollution, everywhere and anywhere Nowhere, can I flow as free as air Nor can I breathe purity Nor can I sense chastity What has happened to humanity? As the wind lamented, my fright disappeared It shook and pity overwhelmed my heart But the wind talked once more, as I feared I shall bring forth destruction and down shall be those smart Those who think the world is made up of their sole part! Be prepared, it continued, be prepared for the havoc The world should be cleaned in each block I shall do so via a shock The time shall come with the clock Be prepared for the rejuvenation! On that dark alley, my blood turned cold And my heart for my likes become hard Even if with love and care it is mould I pray for the coming of the Bard The one to cure the world of this negativity!
Placed 3rd in the contest.... :)

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Date: 7/26/2012 5:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Dungeon"contest Anoucheka. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/23/2012 3:25:00 AM
:) Thk You so much everyone! :)
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Date: 7/23/2012 3:04:00 AM
Anoucheka congrats on your win, love it..David
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Date: 7/22/2012 3:29:00 PM
Hello fine new poet friend what a master word smith you are, just loved the topic and the personification. Congrad's on your fine verse winning big! Light & Love
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Date: 7/22/2012 10:03:00 AM
Big congratulations on your win. I love the line praying for the coming of the Bard!
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Date: 7/22/2012 7:33:00 AM
congrats Anoucheka on a superb write and win for this wonderful entry luv.. captivating tale..
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Date: 7/17/2012 9:46:00 PM
nice write Anoucheka
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Date: 7/16/2012 6:59:00 PM
funny you should ask.
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 7/16/2012 10:42:00 PM
ur opinion....:)
Date: 7/15/2012 12:23:00 PM
Please list this as Verse, or Rhyme for a Quatrain has 4 lines ;)..you could even list it as Personification because you are making the wind talk! Thanks for the entry Light & Love
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 7/15/2012 9:17:00 PM
oops thks meant to list it as Quintain...! Listed it as rhyme finally!!
Date: 7/15/2012 12:16:00 PM
the answer is blowing in the wind Anoucheka...enjoyed...Joseph
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 7/15/2012 9:17:00 PM
thks to you! :)
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