On Suicide's Watch

A new poem to complete
An empty space bleeds
A beautiful, sunshine glory we need

His young life is unfinished, 
Dont let him feel like its diminished, 
Watch him from the corner of your eye as he cries,
He looks fine but hiding in his mind, 
Ask him how life is currently today? 
Make sure he is not willing to disappear away,
Sometimes you dont know that you're lost,
So think brighter and leave alone the past, 

Life is ok Mr it affects us all, boytjie its ok to be stonewalled, 
There's no Jesus or Mother Mary and Jesus Christ the son, 
Heaven's silence is so quite that I am even stunned numb,
But angels willing to help you from darkness to some sun or to someone, 
i can guarantee you that if I make you smile now,
That all your worries and sorrows arent so big of a wow,

I'm here to help you, 
And make sure life is not blue,
Dont give up and dont give in,
Suicide is a bad idea and it shouldn't win,
Believe you can, can and can,
Push through like you can, can and man.
I care, we all care,  someone cares about you,
Be brave and not sad and accept you,
You're an untold story,
A beautiful sunshine glory.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/5/2016 10:30:00 AM
Beautiful words my friend , enjoyed every line....hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 12/19/2015 8:52:00 AM
wow this poem was a journey between light and shade and packed with emotions to survive...i love this poem
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