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On Snow Shovelling

On Snow Shovelling

A foot of snow fell by night
With no let-up in sight.
(“Brrr, it’s cold out there.”)–
A mutt rebounds past my window,
As I contemplate the morning weather,
While sipping my hot cup of coffee.

By the street-lamp’s hazy glow,
I make out my neighbour:
Clad in a scarf, tuque, and parka,
With a winter implement
Grasped in her mitten covered hands,
Bravely confronting the heart attack weather,
And tossing snow over her shoulders,
To clear the driveway from garage to curb
For the mechanical beast to enter
The unplowed street.

She stops and calls to the mutt.
(No doubt, an excuse to catch her breath.)
The dog, tail wagging, rushes to his master;
Who brushes the snow from his fur;
And I venture to guess,—an “Atta-boy!”—
As if the dog had accomplished
Some great endeavour.

But, they both seem to derive pleasure
From the brief encounter.
The Master resumes her shovelling,
And the mutt to his romping,
And I to thinking
While sipping my hot cup of coffee;—
I too will have to face the inclement weather:
Clad in a scarf, tuque, and parka,
And commit to the task of snow shovelling.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 8/29/2022 8:59:00 AM
Such truisms here. We ponder the task of snow shovelling while holding a warm cup of coffee + contemplate back pain. (At least, I do.) Great winter scene in your fine posting. All the best, Brian
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 9/11/2022 10:34:00 AM
Thank you very much, Brian. Before you know it, Winter will be here. The inspiration for the poem comes from my sister who I still can picture shovelling snow.
Date: 1/26/2022 4:22:00 PM
Dennis, I have not seen this Diego Rivera before now, and would not have guessed it was from him. It's a good one though, and I really enjoyed reading your poetic tale as though you were watching this woman shovel her snow while procrastinating your own snow shoveling. I really like your ekphrasis poetry - something I don't see a lot of on this site.
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 1/28/2022 9:28:00 AM
I truly appreciate your inspiring and flattering comments of the poem. Diego Rivera painted the picture "Woman Snow Picking" in 1955, while undergoing cancer treatment in Moscow, Russia. The picture reminds me of my sister shovelling snow.
Date: 1/8/2022 3:35:00 PM
Hello Denis Spilchuk, yes best to get it done. Before another snowfalls appears. Then there will be more snow to shovel. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/9/2022 11:06:00 AM
Hello Denis, waiting too long for the snow to stop falling makes it too heavy to shovel the snow. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 1/9/2022 6:45:00 AM
Words of wisdom, Darlene. Thank you for leaving a comment. Take care.
Date: 1/8/2022 1:32:00 PM
Dennis, I enjoyed your slice of life poem on snow shoveling. Your descriptions made it easy to picture the scene! Blessings, Kim M
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 1/8/2022 3:21:00 PM
Thank you Kim. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. I still chuckle to myself when I read it.
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