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On Snow Shovelling

On Snow Shovelling

A foot of snow fell by night
with no let-up in sight.
(“Brrr, it’s cold out there.”)
A mutt rebounds past my window
as I contemplate the morning weather
while sipping my hot cup of coffee.

By the street lamp’s hazy glow,
I make out my neighbour,
who’s clad in a scarf, tuque, and parka,
and with a winter implement
grasped in her mitten-covered hands,
bravely confronting the heart-attack weather
while tossing snow over her shoulders
to clear the driveway from garage to curb
for the mechanical beast to enter
the unplowed street.

She stops and calls to the mutt
(no doubt an excuse to catch her breath).
The dog, tail wagging, rushes to his master,
who brushes the snow from his fur
and, I venture to guess, says, “Atta-boy!”
as if the dog had overcome
some great endeavour.

But they both seem to derive pleasure
from the brief encounter.
The master resumes her shovelling
and the mutt his romping,
and I, continue thinking
while sipping my hot cup of coffee that I, too,
will have to face the inclement weather,
clad in a scarf, tuque, and parka,
and commit to the task of snow shovelling.
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Sambourne Avatar
August 29, 2022 at 8:59 AM
Such truisms here. We ponder the task of snow shovelling while holding a warm cup of coffee + contemplate back pain. (At least, I do.) Great winter scene in your fine posting. All the best, Brian
Spilchuk Avatar
September 11, 2022 at 10:34 AM
Thank you very much, Brian. Before you know it, Winter will be here. The inspiration for the poem comes from my sister who I still can picture shovelling snow.
Watt Avatar
January 26, 2022 at 4:22 PM
Dennis, I have not seen this Diego Rivera before now, and would not have guessed it was from him. It's a good one though, and I really enjoyed reading your poetic tale as though you were watching this woman shovel her snow while procrastinating your own snow shoveling. I really like your ekphrasis poetry - something I don't see a lot of on this site.
Spilchuk Avatar
January 28, 2022 at 9:28 AM
I truly appreciate your inspiring and flattering comments of the poem. Diego Rivera painted the picture "Woman Snow Picking" in 1955, while undergoing cancer treatment in Moscow, Russia. The picture reminds me of my sister shovelling snow.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 3:35 PM
Hello Denis Spilchuk, yes best to get it done. Before another snowfalls appears. Then there will be more snow to shovel. Enjoy your evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 11:06 AM
Hello Denis, waiting too long for the snow to stop falling makes it too heavy to shovel the snow. Enjoy your day my friend.
Spilchuk Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 6:45 AM
Words of wisdom, Darlene. Thank you for leaving a comment. Take care.
Merryman Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 1:32 PM
Dennis, I enjoyed your slice of life poem on snow shoveling. Your descriptions made it easy to picture the scene! Blessings, Kim M
Spilchuk Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 3:21 PM
Thank you Kim. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. I still chuckle to myself when I read it.
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