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on second thoughts

if you want to do something logical ~ at least think about it first if this advice feels illogical ~ it’s probably just your bubble burst by David Kavanagh

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I Am Anaya

Date: 6/19/2025 2:21:00 AM

My "Short" term memory may disagree with my dwarf thoughts, on second thought, it's too short, nevermind. I thought your Monoku was most logical. Cheers~ ha ha ha love it, David said with a wide jaw giggling

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/19/2025 9:33:00 AM

Phew, that was one grizzly elf last night-mare ')

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/19/2025 8:45:00 AM

Heya Anaya, And that’s exactly what I was aiming for a logical outcome with seemingly illogical concepts, phew! it worked lol! Cheers David

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/18/2025 1:59:00 PM

What creative Monoku writes you have here. Love This... Something to think about. Cheers to a wonderful day. Have a fun day writing away.....

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/18/2025 11:50:00 PM

Thanks Paula, a little bit of logic goes a long way (until it doesn’t) lol! Cheers David

Di11y Da11y

Date: 6/18/2025 9:23:00 AM

Valuable thinking time - clever stuff David, as per

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/18/2025 10:47:00 AM

Thanks Dilly, I had second thoughts about posting this one, but I think it stands up to scrutiny, even if it amounts to nothing ;) cheers David

Jan Allison

Date: 6/18/2025 9:21:00 AM

ha ha ha love it David:-) hugs jan xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/18/2025 10:39:00 AM

Heya Jan, I thought this was my best ever Monoku, but I was living in a bubble whilst writing it lol! Cheers David