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on second thoughts

if you want to do something logical ~ at least think about it first 

if this advice feels illogical ~ it’s probably just your bubble burst 


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David Kavanagh

ironyperspectivemonoku

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FJ Thomas

July 22, 2025 at 9:10 AM

That is most logical reasoning. Lol Hello David

David Kavanagh

July 22, 2025 at 11:46 AM

Heya FJ, yes there is logic behind this one, but only til the bubble bursts lol! your new avatar is very cute! Cheers David

I Am Anaya

June 19, 2025 at 2:21 AM

My "Short" term memory may disagree with my dwarf thoughts, on second thought, it's too short, nevermind. I thought your Monoku was most logical. Cheers~ ha ha ha love it, David said with a wide jaw giggling

I Am Anaya

June 19, 2025 at 9:33 AM

Phew, that was one grizzly elf last night's-mare ')

David Kavanagh

June 19, 2025 at 8:45 AM

Heya Anaya, And that’s exactly what I was aiming for a logical outcome with seemingly illogical concepts, phew! it worked lol! Cheers David