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On Rippled Waters Haiku 78

between shapeless clouds the first peak of sunbeams on rippled waters

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 5/15/2015 9:53:00 AM
This is lovely!! :D :D
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Date: 2/28/2015 4:50:00 AM
Excellent Haiku! I invite you to read mine... I have written several this month, and they are all high quality and admired by john fleming, for instance. Best wishes, Julia
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Date: 11/5/2014 9:14:00 PM
I love the imagery in this one, Char! Very nice haiku! Thank you for visiting my page. Much appreciated. Love and hugs! :) xxxx D
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Date: 11/3/2014 7:15:00 AM
O I can connect, fantabulous Charmaine LOVE .....RAJAT
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Date: 10/31/2014 7:31:00 AM
I've only been writing for 5 years, and every time I read Haiku, I'm in awe that so many images can be described by so few words. This piece is no exception, love it Charmaine, James :)
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Date: 10/30/2014 11:44:00 AM
This is lovely Charm; last week I took a coloured photo that resembles this one, and the result came out nearly in black and white. (I have a silhouette of Filfla in it, too) // paul
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Date: 10/29/2014 8:16:00 PM
I declare, Charma, you are the queen of haiku! They have the outstanding ability to force me to imagine that I am right there, seeing everything with my own two eyes.
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Date: 10/29/2014 5:11:00 AM
outstanding vision in words charmaine very beautifully painted dear friend
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Date: 10/29/2014 4:04:00 AM
Stunning! Hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/29/2014 3:27:00 AM
Excellent haiku!
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Date: 10/29/2014 12:49:00 AM
charma, you have to be one of the best haiku poets here. You and Kash, two of my top picks! this one shows why!!
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Date: 10/28/2014 10:14:00 PM
Great haiku, the clouds, sun, and water all work together to paint a peaceful image, a new beginning, a promise of change, of love. Well done . . .
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Date: 10/28/2014 9:38:00 PM
Very nice Charma..... Hugs Tim
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Date: 10/28/2014 8:44:00 PM
Lovely! :)
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Date: 10/28/2014 7:27:00 PM
Charma . . . Another very powerful Haiku write!! You rock my dear!! A "7" from me. Best Wishes Always, Gary
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