On Retirement

The warmth of liberation seeps into my every pore.
The flow of freedom from the constraints of my working life
glistens like the sparkle of a Highland river,
and my heart gambols in its glory: the final chapter 
of a story. The finale of the tome that holds the
memoirs of my toiling years is complete.

I feel the locks of professional responsibility snap open and I’m free: emancipated from the role that has consumed me since the dawn of its existence some thirty years ago. 
Yet it’s been my familiarity for so long, and I’m faced 
with the uncertainty of ‘what now?’ accompanied by
the bitter sweet acceptance that it’s time to go.

Yet this ‘going’ is a sign of rapidly advancing years;
a leaving behind of the script I know so well.
The page is blank now, and time’s become my own.
A step into the unknown, a crossroads at 
which I pause to take a breath and sit a while. 
No need to rush for now - or at all any more.

The train rolls on and I see the passengers
so engrossed in their activities they fail
to see me leave; just another departing commuter.
And so it continues, leaving me behind as it, 
like me, disappears into the distance.
I stand alone on the platform, new life in hand, luggage free.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Agustin Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 3:40 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts about retirement through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Leake Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 9:32 AM
Enjoyed this Verse on retirement Nicely done Kevin
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