Chetta Achara Poet Free verse

Notes About The Poem

On Rainy Days

I am
positively 
negative 
that's why
friends
and family
get a 
charge 
out of me,
except on
rainy 
days
when I'm 
negatively 
negative
that's
called
vitamin D
deficiency
induced
gloomy-ness. 

How I long for the sun and the flowers;
where is the fun when the rain showers
its gloom on the bowers?

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Paige Hind June 21, 2024 at 3:03 PM Very clever and pokes at fun- loved it

Hilda Greenhough June 20, 2024 at 4:29 PM I know this feeling. By end of November, I'm totally affected by S.A.D. thanks for the vitamin D tip. Chetta Achara June 20, 2024 at 7:32 PM I can always tell when I am experiencing a rainy day versus a sunny day, and I live in the Pacific Northwest so, lots of rainy days. A few years ago some doctors tried to say SAD wasn’t a real thing. Sure Doc, if you say so.