On Prayer Answered

Some folks say all their prayers are answered
I question their word on this doubtful assertion,
For it clearly would show God is partial to some
Requiring from others, more convincing coercion.

written October 16, 2021
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Won Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 6:42 AM
I like to think that G-d helps those that help themselves. Nicely written :)
Hankins Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 8:03 AM
Thank you, Avery. Personally, I think prayer is somewhat overrated, but tell anyone, okay?
Krutsinger Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 1:26 PM
"all their prayers""? Call me Thomas.
Hankins Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 1:32 PM
I'm afraid I'm a Thomas on all this prayer business. Shall I wait for the lightening to strike, or just recant now????
Wolf Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 4:48 PM
Then again, depends on the quality of the question(s)... Some folks still think G-d is a 'year-round Santa Claus.' :) gw
Hankins Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 7:25 PM
So true, gw, and they set themselves up for disappointment! Thanks for your kind thoughts.
Hawkins Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 5:12 PM
WoW! can I borrow your muse please Milt...
Hankins Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 8:08 PM
You sure can, Shirley, although my muse sometimes clams up! Thanks for the read and comment.
Calasibetta Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 2:14 PM
How insightful....great write! Blessings, Paulette
Hankins Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 8:10 PM
Thanks, Paulette, so much. I'm glad you read my poem, and I appreciate the delightful comment.
Leffanta Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 11:42 AM
Excellent point!
Hankins Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 12:22 PM
Seems that way to me, anyway. Thanks for your read and comment.
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