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On Parting

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how i dream sweet soul mate of the moment when i will join you ~ when my work here will be done and i’ll have given all that i could give only then in peace most willingly i’ll leave all behind to find my wings over my shoulder give but a quick glance and with content heart blow one final kiss ~ goodbye mother earth hello universe AP: 3rd place 2021 Posted on April 24, 2021

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Date: 4/25/2021 4:19:00 PM
Reading this wonderful poem is pure pleasure, Line. Your lines evoke a natural and necessary process, which death is. Marvelous!
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Date: 4/25/2021 9:02:00 PM
Thank yo very much, Evelyn ~
Date: 4/25/2021 11:01:00 AM
Ah, I adore the last two lines, they singe the entire poem. I pray one day when my turn comes I will leave this way too, Blowing kisses to the wind, and flying up with a smile :) thankyou my dear for your words today .
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Date: 4/25/2021 9:02:00 PM
Thank you for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 4/25/2021 8:50:00 AM
You have made this journey feel so comforting for you, to be able to find and live and be re-united with your sweet soul-mate. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/25/2021 9:03:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jennifer ~
Date: 4/25/2021 8:23:00 AM
Very sweet! Excellent, well written Line :)
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Date: 4/25/2021 9:03:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi ~
Date: 4/25/2021 7:50:00 AM
I too believe this is a winner. I feel like I have won simply by reading it.
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Date: 4/25/2021 7:52:00 AM
aw so sweet ~ thank you, Richard
Date: 4/25/2021 7:21:00 AM
this is awesome - I agree with Gershon
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Date: 4/25/2021 7:52:00 AM
Thanks, Jack ~
Date: 4/24/2021 8:42:00 PM
O, Line! You have provided the Unseeking Seeker reason to award a #1 Winner in this contest. Just perfect. Yours is a love affair for the ages. Bravo! A FAVE for me. :) gw
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Date: 4/24/2021 9:05:00 PM
aww ~ thank you, Gershon. What a lovely compliment.

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