ON OUR VACATION IN RIO

The nights near your endearing, deep cocoa skin, Silently, splendiferous, in this, sensitive , Spring we revel in. Samba music fingers, paint energetic dancers on the Spring walls, Lost in the beckoning and hypnotically, loves’s, passionate night call. You quiet my soul, with your tender, intoxicating, loving tenacity, And create sweet hours, revelling in our world to poetic capacity! 3/29/2025 updated poem
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Goldsmith Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 12:57 PM
What a wonderful romantic/love ~ write/story you have here. I always enjoy reading your writes. Keep them coming. Have a wonderful spring day writing away.........
Fowler Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 10:23 AM
Very sensuous write dear Pangie. You captured that poetic fling in this poem. :)
Romios Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 2:17 PM
Yes, you got that right Linda.! I am so glad you rode today.. you’ve been on my appreciation list with such a long time. Thank you for understanding me and laughing with me at me in our personal communications.Enjoy Life, Pangie vv
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 29, 2025 at 10:54 AM
Hello Panagiota, I enjoyed reading this poem. Itis very romantic. Hugs. /Darlene xxx
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 29, 2025 at 3:22 PM
Hello Panagiota, I had a nice day. Enjoy your evening . Hugs. /Darlene/xxx
Romios Avatar
March 29, 2025 at 11:14 AM
Buenos Dias Darlene, Thank you for reading this! Have a great dayy, Hugs, Pangie xx
Greenhough Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 5:20 PM
Another terrific poem. I like the mysterious romance it describes. Nothing could be more exciting tha Rio.
Romios Avatar
March 28, 2025 at 2:03 PM
The mind can be a “ terrible thing” that was a line from a comdedian! I read this hours ago. What I think I did….was that I went to make comment to your poem and sent you a mail and then did not return to your poem, golly, how embarassing! But,,how human. Pangie. And yes nothing like a sexy, loving, hunk in our lives. Woo Hoo! Pangie
Eagle Avatar
March 24, 2025 at 7:25 PM
A romantic poem with musical tone and love. An extremely well written piece that I enjoyed.
Romios Avatar
March 25, 2025 at 1:52 PM
Yes, good poetry has a relationship to musical sounds, and you read it in all good poetry here,. There are other types,of course! I like this form. . I’m just a beginner.. Hugs, Pangie
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March 24, 2025 at 8:57 AM
Your a star dear Pangie, wishing you many more quiet nights.
Romios Avatar
March 24, 2025 at 4:36 PM
You are my star here, John.! You are compassionate and humble. You are my sunshine @ the Soup! Hugs, Pangie
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