Bukang Liwayway Poet Rhyme

On One Summer Day

While striding up to a greener hillside,
Looking at my surrounding with eyes so wide,
I can feel the coolness air under the tall trees,
Birds are singing and the buzzing of the bees.

Enjoy the quite moments on one hot summer day,
Decided to take a rest on busy days is the best way,
Embrace the beauty of nature just for a day,
To gain my strength but in the end I still want to stay.

Clouds formed a heart shape to comfort me,
Flowing water from the river makes me thirsty,
Grasses and flowers everywhere looks perfect,
Blue mountain, lovely day, sun is up..its magic!


June 8, 2013
For Francine's "A Summer Day" Contest

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Andrea Dietrich January 21, 2014 at 6:42 PM This paints the picture of a perfect summer day, sweetie!! I'm glad to have found it! I have read many of your poems but this somehow got past me!

Randy Curry July 1, 2013 at 9:19 AM nice visuals from your write. very serene. thanks for sharing and also for commenting on my poem. ran

Michael Ainsley June 30, 2013 at 7:24 PM I love to watch the clouds! We see the things that are moving in the secrets of our minds and of course the things we love. Thank you Maria for sharing your light filled words. Always be good to you ; Michael

David De La Croes June 24, 2013 at 12:31 AM It is winter here where I live, so your beautiful poem bring some sunshine into my life! well-written, Maria. Best of luck, David

Debbie Guzzi June 21, 2013 at 2:45 PM A beautiful summer day! Light & Love

John Posey June 17, 2013 at 5:29 PM Magic, indeed.. blended with some well placed creativity... Great work.... Jake

Ravi Sathasivam June 15, 2013 at 11:58 PM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Richard Lamoureux June 10, 2013 at 7:36 PM I can hardly wait for it to arrive, you have painted a vivid picture.

Len Gasun June 9, 2013 at 3:15 AM This is a great poem with a beautiful image my very dear friend Maria! I like especially the clouds formed a heart shape. Good luck in the contest my dear friend! Have a blessed Sunday! love lots, Leonora

Robert Pettit June 8, 2013 at 11:17 AM A very imaginative write. Good luck with it in Francine's contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 8, 2013 at 6:25 AM - Sounded like a perfect summer day, Maria. - Beautiful. - Good luck in the contest, hope your poem will win!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)