On One Summer Day

While striding up to a greener hillside,
Looking at my surrounding with eyes so wide,
I can feel the coolness air under the tall trees,
Birds are singing and the buzzing of the bees.

Enjoy the quite moments on one hot summer day,
Decided to take a rest on busy days is the best way,
Embrace the beauty of nature just for a day,
To gain my strength but in the end I still want to stay.

Clouds formed a heart shape to comfort me,
Flowing water from the river makes me thirsty,
Grasses and flowers everywhere looks perfect,
Blue mountain, lovely day, sun is up..its magic!


June 8, 2013
For Francine's "A Summer Day" Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/21/2014 6:42:00 PM
This paints the picture of a perfect summer day, sweetie!! I'm glad to have found it! I have read many of your poems but this somehow got past me!
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Date: 7/1/2013 9:19:00 AM
nice visuals from your write. very serene. thanks for sharing and also for commenting on my poem. ran
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Date: 6/30/2013 7:24:00 PM
I love to watch the clouds! We see the things that are moving in the secrets of our minds and of course the things we love. Thank you Maria for sharing your light filled words. Always be good to you ; Michael
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Date: 6/24/2013 12:31:00 AM
It is winter here where I live, so your beautiful poem bring some sunshine into my life! well-written, Maria. Best of luck, David
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Date: 6/21/2013 2:45:00 PM
A beautiful summer day! Light & Love
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Date: 6/17/2013 5:29:00 PM
Magic, indeed.. blended with some well placed creativity... Great work.... Jake
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Date: 6/15/2013 11:58:00 PM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 6/10/2013 7:36:00 PM
I can hardly wait for it to arrive, you have painted a vivid picture.
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Date: 6/9/2013 3:15:00 AM
This is a great poem with a beautiful image my very dear friend Maria! I like especially the clouds formed a heart shape. Good luck in the contest my dear friend! Have a blessed Sunday! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 6/8/2013 11:17:00 AM
A very imaginative write. Good luck with it in Francine's contest.
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Date: 6/8/2013 6:25:00 AM
- Sounded like a perfect summer day, Maria. - Beautiful. - Good luck in the contest, hope your poem will win!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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