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On One July Night

Gathering, waiting As dusk settles near, Patiently anticipating To watch and to hear The first shooting spark To utter a boom, And fill up the dark With a crackling bloom Familiar faces angled To get the best view, Of a sky spangled With red, white and blue Joined by the fireflies And their show of light, 'Til the last firework dies On one July night.

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Date: 7/28/2023 1:29:00 AM
A lovely poem Kelly - so well written. Wonderful imagery. Thank you for sharing.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/26/2024 4:01:00 PM
Thank you for reading, Christina ... I appreciate the kind words :)
Date: 7/15/2023 7:34:00 AM
Great rhyme, Kelly, I love these kind of short lines rhyming:)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/23/2024 6:20:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words, Joanna :)
Date: 7/11/2023 6:33:00 PM
You bring me back to memories of days of old, when watching fireworks, made our hearts swell with pride Kelly. You poem is amazing, have a blessed evening. :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/23/2024 6:07:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words, Vie, as always :)
Date: 7/9/2023 11:29:00 AM
Nice penning Kelly, with good rhyme and flow with really nice imagery too. Blessings,Gordon
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/22/2024 5:05:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words, Gordon, as always :)
Date: 7/6/2023 10:29:00 AM
such a great placid walk into the ensuing heavens asunder in sound and color...loved it
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/22/2024 4:47:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words, Timothy :)

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