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On November

ON NOVEMBER
          
      Smoggy foggy November Sky:
      Starry fairy ready to fly
      to Earth on visit as artist,   
      fluttered downy wings to resist
      the intermittent wintry breeze,
       floating, gliding, swooping at ease.

     Reached Earth at dawn: Met butterfly.
     Glistened dewdrops tending to dry.
     To sip honey, blooms to insist.
      Fairy took sip, bees to assist.
      Fairy danced on furrows with crease
       of feral field amidst tall trees.

      She stood on strand, stream flowing by.
      On rippling waves peeped a small fry.
      She watched creepers on curly twist
       and took tendril to tie on wrist.
       Chilled November wind not to cease.
       Plants sighed for dry leaves to release.

      ‘Sweetness of fruits to multiply,
       Scent of rose to intensify’-
        November always optimist.
        Fairy smelt rose as a florist.
      Charm on Earthly tour to increase.
       Glad to see pair of golden geese.

      Periwinkles twinkled: Looked shy!
        Starry fairy smiled to say ’Hi!’.
      Shimmering Sun sent rays from East.
      clearing vision through hazy mist.
       Trip over: To leave Earth's premise
     Fairy flew with some cranberries.


   10/31/20
   
                                                                        Second Place
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  'Lay November'  Contest by William Kekaula
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kendrick Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 1:23 PM
Congrats on your winner. I like the personification in your work. Sara
Dutta Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 7:48 PM
Thanks n Blessing
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 6:02 PM
Thank you for sharing a wondrous part of yourself, Anisha, my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
Dutta Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 7:49 PM
Thanks William for appreciation . Blessings.
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