On My Window Frame

In
the early
morning sun-
a painted lady
lazes 'ere her day has begun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Richards Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 9:35 AM
Oh my...this is a gem.....love this and into my favorites! ~ Carrie
Johnson Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 6:28 AM
How clever of you to notice. Great poetic thought. Thanks for your always kind comments. Love, Joyce
Higgins Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 4:02 AM
This is certainly one of your best Brain.. I just love how you went from morning sun to a painted lady..good write...one for the faves.
Kelly Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 2:40 AM
Oohh ! , the " pane" of it . The Ashes are almost dust to dust , and PH has water-difficulties . Meeeooow !! ..
Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 2:10 AM
I wonder if that is a cat. Interesting writing. Keep writing. Sara
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