On My Window Frame

In the early morning sun- a painted lady lazes 'ere her day has begun

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Carrie Richards

Date: 8/10/2009 9:35:00 AM

Oh my...this is a gem.....love this and into my favorites! ~ Carrie

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/10/2009 6:28:00 AM

How clever of you to notice. Great poetic thought. Thanks for your always kind comments. Love, Joyce

Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/10/2009 4:02:00 AM

This is certainly one of your best Brain.. I just love how you went from morning sun to a painted lady..good write...one for the faves.

Sean Kelly

Date: 8/10/2009 2:40:00 AM

Oohh ! , the " pane" of it . The Ashes are almost dust to dust , and PH has water-difficulties . Meeeooow !! ..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/10/2009 2:10:00 AM

I wonder if that is a cat. Interesting writing. Keep writing. Sara