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On My Shrew's Death

My shew is no longer breathing This I really do lament My shrew is no longer kicking I find myself in torment; I wonder where its soul went; Could it be Alaska or Benelux? This death definitely sucks For it was a creature, a tender creature Whose system ceased functioning altogether; Today, I can only see a bleak future; For it no longer moves For it no longer laugs Such lack of noise and motion means Tears in my eyes and apathy; Life without you is colourless; Such a tiny peaceful mammal Who has never pestered anyone I will really miss this animal Since now I am truly alone For my best friend is gone; Its little heart stopped working And mine since then is aching; I could hold you in my hand So much fun remains in my mind; If only time we could rewind! There's no therapy to get over this No alcohol since I'm a teetotaler No video games. I loathe them I can't focus on chess now I can't read poetry like this My shrew is always in my mind But nowhere in my life Just a cold still body It's dead. Dead. Like my joy. Gone. But worry not, my little mammal This won't last long... I will see you soon, my lovely friend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/8/2014 7:24:00 PM
crazy, crazy.
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Date: 4/11/2014 3:56:00 PM
Ouch! Very interesting write, but no need to follow the little fellow, except to follow your way and get another little friend. I love how you developed this poem. I love story poems but tend to make them more light poetry... If you liked my poem try my 'The Postman Cometh', 'Fruit Loops', 'Enlightenment of the Kung Poo Master', 'Armadilly Billy The Slingshop Kidster', and some others...
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Date: 4/10/2014 9:52:00 PM
Hi Ivo, a very special poem. Sad, thank you for the nice visit on my poem.... Linda
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Date: 4/10/2014 7:20:00 PM
What kind of animal is a Shrew?
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