On My Mind

And there it was, 
somewhere along wreath of winds
I was brought to the lightest of ease.

Here, under the pour of this waterfall, 
I wish to lay on glossy tracks  
Tending fingers among the pebbles, 
I marvel.This landscape of my mind.

Of this I wish to bring to you,
Or you to it.
Whomever it is that you might be.

A place, however far away-
The liquid trail lies clear, soothingly
Ahead of me.   



Limits Contest, Chase Trevi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nunez Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 6:34 AM
Such languid thoughts...beautiful, serene. Keep posting, Lyva! hugs
Andresen Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 3:19 AM
- A lovely poem, Lyva - Good luck in contest !- hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 2:07 AM
your style is distinct; i enjoy the fragmented but flowing expression of this piece, lyva... thanks for your feedback!
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