Vijay Pandit Poet Villanelle

On My Horizon You Rise

Becoming my rays of hope on my horizon you rise
Bending to form a spectrum shining morning dew   
Enchanting ardent vibes, painting panoramic skies

Dreaming of your splendor I inform my eager eyes
Pointing to vibrant vistas where singing birds flew
Becoming my rays of hope on my horizon you rise

Budding sunrise quivers gently hearing my cries
Dispersing darker clouds to enlist emerging blue
Enchanting ardent vibes, painting panoramic skies

Tracing glowing ascent I transcend to newer highs
Finding comfort in cosmic grandeur animating you 
Becoming my rays of hope on my horizon you rise

Saying scenic goodbye amid twilight as my prize
Parting hastily coloring mosaic images you drew
Enchanting ardent vibes, painting panoramic skies

Collecting my heart I go where gentle winds blew
Yearning for your arrival till dawn breaks through
Becoming my rays of hope on my horizon you rise
Enchanting ardent vibes, painting panoramic skies

April 9, 2018

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Valsa George March 25, 2022 at 6:01 AM 'Becoming my rays of hope on my horizon you rise Enchanting ardent vibes, painting panoramic skies'...... ! What lovely images you always paint and bring in one after another, Vijay ! You always excel in this form,dear friend !

Vladislav Raven November 15, 2018 at 8:33 AM Hi Vijay, this is such a beautiful Villanelle, you write this form so well, expressing your emotions in gentle words. This is an excellent work Vijay. You always paint your canvas with such strong images. Your words are gold my friend. Have a wonderful Thursday. Your friend always....Mike.

Joseph May November 3, 2018 at 12:04 PM Great Villanelle Vijay..Best wishes..

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 11, 2018 at 7:19 AM Sublime ink my friend. Congratulations on your win! x

Line Gauthier May 10, 2018 at 10:50 PM Lovely, Vijay. Congrats on your win.

Kim Rodrigues April 16, 2018 at 7:05 AM Good Morning, Vijay! Waking up to this lovely word painting! Today is in the very cold, once again, but this warms my heart! Vijay Pandit April 16, 2018 at 7:32 AM Thank you Kim.

Gary Bateman April 15, 2018 at 6:16 AM Hello Vijay, Very well-done my friend!! I've written some Villanelles in the past and they are fun to do as long as the poet is able to match that format to the theme he or she is writing about. You have done this marvelously. Enchanting and romantic here for sure!! A FAVE also!! Best Wishes, Gary Vijay Pandit April 15, 2018 at 7:58 AM Always happy to read your feedback Gary..many thanks for your visit and comments.

Pandita Sietesantos April 13, 2018 at 10:14 AM A most beautiful and romantic piece that charmed my heart! Beautifully written, my friend! Best wishes. Pandita Vijay Pandit April 15, 2018 at 7:57 AM Many thanks Pandita..appreciate your kind feedback.

Charlie Smith April 11, 2018 at 12:13 PM Panoramic for sure, lovely work and best wishes... Vijay Pandit April 12, 2018 at 6:37 AM Thank you Charlie.

Maria Williams April 11, 2018 at 4:47 AM What an enchanting colorful palette you possess Vijay, your brushstrokes are flawless, you paint the most beautiful panoramic skies.....Maria :) Vijay Pandit April 11, 2018 at 7:18 AM Delighted by your visit and kind words..appreciate your thoughts and comments, as always..many thanks Maria.

James Swartz April 10, 2018 at 6:09 PM You words form such vivacious and beautiful images in my mind Vijay. Your poems are always a light of hope and i enjoy them. Vijay Pandit April 11, 2018 at 7:17 AM Thank you James..always enjoy reading your feedback.

Alexis Y. April 10, 2018 at 1:55 PM Hi Vijay, This is just beautiful. Your well written write has good imagery and content. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Vijay Pandit April 10, 2018 at 3:34 PM Thank you Alexis..appreciate your kind words.

Demetrios Trifiatis April 10, 2018 at 12:39 PM Enchanting poem with vivifying imagery that uplifts both heart and soul! Superbly written dear friend, Vijay! Vijay Pandit April 10, 2018 at 3:33 PM Many thanks Demetrios--enjoyed reading your comments.

Richard Lamoureux April 10, 2018 at 7:55 AM Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous! Vijay Pandit April 10, 2018 at 3:33 PM Thank you Richard.

Andrea Dietrich April 9, 2018 at 6:03 PM wow, very very beautiful, Vijay! Vijay Pandit April 10, 2018 at 6:10 AM Appreciate your kind words and support..many thanks Andrea.

Connie Marcum Wong April 9, 2018 at 5:44 PM Lovely imagery and verse in this outstanding Villanelle Vijay! A delight to read thisafternoon. : ) Vijay Pandit April 10, 2018 at 6:09 AM Many thanks Connie..appreciate your kind feedback, as always.

Yazmin Malik April 9, 2018 at 2:25 PM You brought the poem to life!! Vijay Pandit April 9, 2018 at 3:42 PM Thank you Yazmin.

Nette Onclaud April 9, 2018 at 10:39 AM vijay, uplifting the heart through fresh light... nice job!..huggs Vijay Pandit April 9, 2018 at 11:02 AM Thank you nette..appreciate your kind words.

Jan Allison April 9, 2018 at 9:43 AM such beautiful imagery Vijay, i love the form you chose and the impact of the repeated lines, my very best wishes for the contest:-) hugs jan xx Vijay Pandit April 9, 2018 at 10:59 AM Many thanks for your visit and kind, supportive feedback..appreciate it as always, Jan.

Becca Teagan April 9, 2018 at 9:08 AM wow, this is like a beautiful painting, full of imagery and life. I love this. Vijay Pandit April 9, 2018 at 10:57 AM Delighted by your visit and supportive comments, Becca..many thanks!

Probir Gupta April 9, 2018 at 9:07 AM Wonderful imagery, Vijay ... Looks like a sure winner ... Vijay Pandit April 9, 2018 at 10:56 AM Thank you Probir--appreciate your kind words.

Mike Gentile April 9, 2018 at 8:41 AM Such beautiful imagery, Vijay! and I feel love weaving all through it, Best for a win !!! Vijay Pandit April 9, 2018 at 10:56 AM Appreciate your feedback Mike..many thanks for your kind words.

Janice Canerdy April 9, 2018 at 8:40 AM Vijay, you are a poet in love with words and imagery--and you know how to make superb use of them! Janice Vijay Pandit April 9, 2018 at 10:55 AM Appreciate your feedback as always, Janice..many thanks for your kind words.

Heidi Sands April 9, 2018 at 8:38 AM Wow Vijay, this sure brings the reader to life. Beautiful enchanting ardent vibes, painting panoramic skies! Looks like a winner! :) Vijay Pandit April 9, 2018 at 10:54 AM Many thanks Heidi..always happy to read your comments..appreciate your kind words.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 9, 2018 at 7:57 AM - Lovely and encouraging with dreams and hope, Vijay - I love it .... and I think Aiyah will love it :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit April 9, 2018 at 10:53 AM Thank you Anne-Lise..always enjoy reading your supportive comments.