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On My Horizon You Rise

Becoming my rays of hope on my horizon you rise Bending to form a spectrum shining morning dew Enchanting ardent vibes, painting panoramic skies Dreaming of your splendor I inform my eager eyes Pointing to vibrant vistas where singing birds flew Becoming my rays of hope on my horizon you rise Budding sunrise quivers gently hearing my cries Dispersing darker clouds to enlist emerging blue Enchanting ardent vibes, painting panoramic skies Tracing glowing ascent I transcend to newer highs Finding comfort in cosmic grandeur animating you Becoming my rays of hope on my horizon you rise Saying scenic goodbye amid twilight as my prize Parting hastily coloring mosaic images you drew Enchanting ardent vibes, painting panoramic skies Collecting my heart I go where gentle winds blew Yearning for your arrival till dawn breaks through Becoming my rays of hope on my horizon you rise Enchanting ardent vibes, painting panoramic skies April 9, 2018

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Valsa George

Date: 3/25/2022 6:01:00 AM

'Becoming my rays of hope on my horizon you rise Enchanting ardent vibes, painting panoramic skies'...... ! What lovely images you always paint and bring in one after another, Vijay ! You always excel in this form,dear friend !

Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/15/2018 8:33:00 AM

Hi Vijay, this is such a beautiful Villanelle, you write this form so well, expressing your emotions in gentle words. This is an excellent work Vijay. You always paint your canvas with such strong images. Your words are gold my friend. Have a wonderful Thursday. Your friend always....Mike.

Joseph May

Date: 11/3/2018 12:04:00 PM

Great Villanelle Vijay..Best wishes..

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/11/2018 7:19:00 AM

Sublime ink my friend. Congratulations on your win! x

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/10/2018 10:50:00 PM

Lovely, Vijay. Congrats on your win.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/16/2018 7:05:00 AM

Good Morning, Vijay! Waking up to this lovely word painting! Today is in the very cold, once again, but this warms my heart!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/16/2018 7:32:00 AM

Thank you Kim.

Gary Bateman

Date: 4/15/2018 6:16:00 AM

Hello Vijay, Very well-done my friend!! I've written some Villanelles in the past and they are fun to do as long as the poet is able to match that format to the theme he or she is writing about. You have done this marvelously. Enchanting and romantic here for sure!! A FAVE also!! Best Wishes, Gary

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/15/2018 7:58:00 AM

Always happy to read your feedback Gary..many thanks for your visit and comments.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 4/13/2018 10:14:00 AM

A most beautiful and romantic piece that charmed my heart! Beautifully written, my friend! Best wishes. Pandita

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/15/2018 7:57:00 AM

Many thanks Pandita..appreciate your kind feedback.

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/11/2018 12:13:00 PM

Panoramic for sure, lovely work and best wishes...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/12/2018 6:37:00 AM

Thank you Charlie.

Maria Williams

Date: 4/11/2018 4:47:00 AM

What an enchanting colorful palette you possess Vijay, your brushstrokes are flawless, you paint the most beautiful panoramic skies.....Maria :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/11/2018 7:18:00 AM

Delighted by your visit and kind words..appreciate your thoughts and comments, as always..many thanks Maria.

James Swartz

Date: 4/10/2018 6:09:00 PM

You words form such vivacious and beautiful images in my mind Vijay. Your poems are always a light of hope and i enjoy them.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/11/2018 7:17:00 AM

Thank you James..always enjoy reading your feedback.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/10/2018 1:55:00 PM

Hi Vijay, This is just beautiful. Your well written write has good imagery and content. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/10/2018 3:34:00 PM

Thank you Alexis..appreciate your kind words.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/10/2018 12:39:00 PM

Enchanting poem with vivifying imagery that uplifts both heart and soul! Superbly written dear friend, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/10/2018 3:33:00 PM

Many thanks Demetrios--enjoyed reading your comments.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/10/2018 7:55:00 AM

Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/10/2018 3:33:00 PM

Thank you Richard.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2018 6:03:00 PM

wow, very very beautiful, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/10/2018 6:10:00 AM

Appreciate your kind words and support..many thanks Andrea.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/9/2018 5:44:00 PM

Lovely imagery and verse in this outstanding Villanelle Vijay! A delight to read thisafternoon. : )

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/10/2018 6:09:00 AM

Many thanks Connie..appreciate your kind feedback, as always.

Yazmin Malik

Date: 4/9/2018 2:25:00 PM

You brought the poem to life!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/9/2018 3:42:00 PM

Thank you Yazmin.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/9/2018 10:39:00 AM

vijay, uplifting the heart through fresh light... nice job!..huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/9/2018 11:02:00 AM

Thank you nette..appreciate your kind words.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/9/2018 9:43:00 AM

such beautiful imagery Vijay, i love the form you chose and the impact of the repeated lines, my very best wishes for the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/9/2018 10:59:00 AM

Many thanks for your visit and kind, supportive feedback..appreciate it as always, Jan.

Becca Teagan

Date: 4/9/2018 9:08:00 AM

wow, this is like a beautiful painting, full of imagery and life. I love this.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/9/2018 10:57:00 AM

Delighted by your visit and supportive comments, Becca..many thanks!

Probir Gupta

Date: 4/9/2018 9:07:00 AM

Wonderful imagery, Vijay ... Looks like a sure winner ...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/9/2018 10:56:00 AM

Thank you Probir--appreciate your kind words.

Mike Gentile

Date: 4/9/2018 8:41:00 AM

Such beautiful imagery, Vijay! and I feel love weaving all through it, Best for a win !!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/9/2018 10:56:00 AM

Appreciate your feedback Mike..many thanks for your kind words.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/9/2018 8:40:00 AM

Vijay, you are a poet in love with words and imagery--and you know how to make superb use of them! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/9/2018 10:55:00 AM

Appreciate your feedback as always, Janice..many thanks for your kind words.

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/9/2018 8:38:00 AM

Wow Vijay, this sure brings the reader to life. Beautiful enchanting ardent vibes, painting panoramic skies! Looks like a winner! :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/9/2018 10:54:00 AM

Many thanks Heidi..always happy to read your comments..appreciate your kind words.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/9/2018 7:57:00 AM

- Lovely and encouraging with dreams and hope, Vijay - I love it .... and I think Aiyah will love it :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/9/2018 10:53:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise..always enjoy reading your supportive comments.