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"When I saw you I fell in love, and you smiled because you knew" Shakespeare _________________________ After the prom my date took me to a diner, we were still wearing our formal wear; oh, I felt so grown up and pretty, our faces glowed with love and happiness. I was so excited that I trembled for I was, on my first date; and my new love looked so proud he was bursting. Proudly I let the soda jerk smell my corsage, I will never take it off no matter what; and I pause often to sniff the scent of the flower given, on my first date. A man beside us watches with a smirk and a smile, and my love sweetly holds my pink sweater and gloves. I will never ever forget this magical evening, and never imagined anything could feel so wonderful; mother had fussed with my dress and hair, she wanted me to look perfect and beautiful; on my first date. I felt like a princess dancing at the prom over and over, and after a slow walk home- a tentative first kiss. ____________________________________ October 2, 2019 Poetry/Narrative/On My First Date Copyright Protected, ID 19-1185-725-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Realism Art sponsor, Eve Roper, Inspiration #1 First Place

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Date: 10/23/2019 12:40:00 PM
Hi BW, You did a good job creating a narrative for the photo. Well done. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a fantastic day my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/23/2019 12:57:00 PM
Alexis, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment, appreciate !
Date: 10/23/2019 7:39:00 AM
Congratulations, Constance!
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Date: 10/23/2019 12:56:00 PM
Kim, thanks so much for the congrats !
Date: 10/21/2019 8:44:00 PM
Dear Heart, this is a wonderful well written poem, the last two stanzas brought back memories. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/22/2019 10:41:00 PM
Eve, thank you so much for the inspiring contest and for my great placement !
Date: 10/21/2019 7:57:00 PM
I love the ending with that timid sweet little kiss. You captured the essence of the picture, dear heart. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/22/2019 10:41:00 PM
Andrea, thanks so much for the compliment and the congrats !
Date: 10/21/2019 2:16:00 AM
what a super story Constance Many congrats :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/21/2019 4:15:00 PM
Jan, thanks for the congrats and the compliment !
Date: 10/3/2019 10:55:00 AM
Dear Heart, What a magical write you have here. What a wonderful memory, of a wonderful night. A fave. Have a nice day. -Richard
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Date: 10/3/2019 1:47:00 PM
Richard, thank you for your awesome comment, it means a lot to me !
Date: 10/2/2019 10:25:00 PM
Beautifully written poem that reveals a beautiful story. Bless you and best in the contest
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Date: 10/3/2019 1:47:00 PM
Regina thanks for visiting and for the beautiful !
Date: 10/2/2019 6:15:00 PM
I was with you all the way on that first date...a perfect poem for the picture...
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Date: 10/3/2019 1:48:00 PM
Jeanne, thanks for visiting and for the compliment !
Date: 10/2/2019 5:12:00 PM
Awwww, I love this!!
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Constance La France
Date: 10/2/2019 5:17:00 PM
Bobby, thanks so much for visiting and for the love !

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