Payal Saxena Poet Light Verse

On My Cloud

On my cloud

While playing with the rainbow,
Didn’t realize when I slipped down.
Tried making others laugh
Instead  got their frown.	

Tried touching stone in diamond
But hard cheese was playing at other end

Tried freeing  my soul from pain
But all hands I tried were in vain

Brain surrendered but
Dreams still ran in blood.
This opened the eyes of the power
Which were at time shut.

Tears of heart melt
Some compassion just crept.

Again dry heart touched some dew.
Again the world seemed to be new
The generous power heard the loud
I am back again on my cloud.

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Beata Agustin September 24, 2024 at 9:57 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Charlie Smith March 13, 2018 at 11:12 AM Stay on that cloud Payal, and keep writing...

Payal Saxena January 9, 2018 at 11:19 PM Thank you Linda. I am thankful to you for reading my poem once again.

Poet Destroyer A January 9, 2018 at 12:14 PM Payal, this is very good poem, I am so glad to read this one again... the best I've read today. Enjoyed reading your poem today. ~LINDA~ Payal Saxena January 9, 2018 at 11:22 PM Thank you Linda. I am thankful to you for reading my poem once again.

Vera Duggan January 8, 2018 at 6:10 PM Hi Payal, I have noticed you haven't written since 2015, well all I can say please continue to write because this is a very good poem, we would all like to see more from you, Have a HAPPY NEW YEAR and take care.......Vera Payal Saxena January 9, 2018 at 2:20 AM Thank you for appreciating and motivating me. Will come back soon with a new writing. Happy New year to you too.

Beejadhur Sewumber January 8, 2018 at 10:07 AM I enjoy your concept and well presented in best words for the purpose. Good write, friend. Payal Saxena January 9, 2018 at 2:19 AM Thank you very muhch for appreciating my efforts sir.

Poet Destroyer A February 21, 2016 at 8:11 PM Payal, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA Payal Saxena February 21, 2016 at 10:18 PM Thank You Linda. Will try my best to keep up to your expectations.

Millard Lowe February 15, 2016 at 2:27 PM Beautiful. I hope one day you cloud will rain down the beauty that is evolving in your poetic mind. Peace and Love, Millard Lowe Payal Saxena February 21, 2016 at 10:24 PM Thank you for your appreciation.

Gail Underwood January 26, 2016 at 7:40 PM A beautiful poem Payal Saxena February 21, 2016 at 10:25 PM Thanks

Skat A December 30, 2015 at 4:44 PM Payla, a pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY NEW YEAR ...... SKAT LOVE Payal Saxena February 21, 2016 at 10:26 PM Thank you. Wishing you too a very happy new year ahead.