On Moonlit Pond

In the dark forest clearing
a family of ducks
escape the hungry fox.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Mcintosh Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 1:06 PM
Beautiful. I love it. God bless you, Love, Gina
Cooper Avatar
January 27, 2015 at 3:46 AM
Superb Haiku so well penned, elegant simplicity of form. i really enjoyed reading. Shane xxx
Comporozos Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 2:50 PM
A real haiku.bravo!
Allison Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 3:18 PM
beautiful imagery really enjoyed your haiku:-) Hugs Jan xx
Stroh Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 3:28 PM
Thanks Jan you're a gem.
Gorelick Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 2:40 PM
Good for them,,nice work. BG
Stroh Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 3:29 PM
thank you for that Barbara
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 11:11 AM
Very nice pen Uwe! Enjoyed your haiku dear friend!Have a lovely week! :) Love and light! xxx D.
Stroh Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 3:30 PM
Thanks D. You have a great week too.
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