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On Monarch's Wings

Upon monarch's wings and morning dew
 a summer day has come to you
 Scent of rose on lilac breeze
 Is wafting through the trees
Butterflies float  by
 'Neath azure  skies
 As birds sing
Their sweet
 Songs

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Suzanne Delaney

June 12, 2014 at 4:07 PM

Beautiful images and form. Summer does fly in on butterfly wings. Congratulations on a fine winning poem. SuZ

Poet Destroyer A

June 9, 2014 at 9:40 AM

NICE WIN MY FRIEND...PD

Saba Khan

June 8, 2014 at 11:55 PM

Congratulations on your win ! :) Wishes---

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 8, 2014 at 5:23 AM

Congratulations Joseph.. :) i knew this will do well.. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 5, 2014 at 10:45 PM

Congratulations on a fine win with this perfect Nonet, Joseph

Andrea Dietrich

June 5, 2014 at 9:39 PM

BIG congrats on your win, joseph!

Mark J. Halliday

June 5, 2014 at 1:40 PM

Very pretty; nice imagery. Congrats on win.

Carrie Richards

June 5, 2014 at 9:45 AM

Uplifting and beautiful...a beautiful poem, Joseph !

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

June 5, 2014 at 8:41 AM

Awesome write Joseph ! Congrats on great win !

Richard Lamoureux

June 5, 2014 at 8:17 AM

Beautiful piece, I enjoyed reading it. Congratulations.

Casarah Nance

June 5, 2014 at 8:14 AM

OOO beautiful. I love the images, your words dance so well, Well done, and great win in the contest. :)

Pandita Sietesantos

June 5, 2014 at 6:58 AM

Thank you for sharing this beautiful write with magnificent imagery! Congratulations on a great win!

Arlene Smith

June 5, 2014 at 6:29 AM

Congrats on your win, Joseph!!... Such a beautiful write... Arlene..

Tim Smith

June 5, 2014 at 3:40 AM

Congrats my friend on the third place win....Tim

Andrea Dietrich

June 4, 2014 at 3:07 PM

awesome, you have GOT the centering down!!!

Joseph May

June 4, 2014 at 5:51 PM

Yeahh...Thank you so much Andrea...hugs

Elaine George

June 4, 2014 at 6:02 AM

Sensation Nonet, Joe. I hope you have entered it in the Nonet contest. A inner for sure. Lainie

Debbie Guzzi

June 3, 2014 at 7:51 PM

Very nice Joe yes you can go fix it again in the edit place! Thanks for stopping by! Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

June 3, 2014 at 4:15 PM

okay, I see you have tried to center. I think you maybe did one thing wrong that made the first line off center. Don't try to change your lines. Just place that first symbol right in front of your first line and don't move that line at all. Keep everything the same. Just put the symbols right in the front of that first line. I really want to blog about centering but I am at school and need to get home. this was a sweet poem, by the way.

Joseph May

June 3, 2014 at 4:42 PM

I think that's where I went wrong, I did try to change the lines. Can it be fixed or should I do it over?

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 3, 2014 at 6:55 AM

creative picture or beauty.. :) i love the way you end it, adding the bird's singing make it more enchanting.. :)

Andrea Dietrich

June 2, 2014 at 8:57 PM

I think Freddie asked for it centered, maybe I am wrong.

Andrea Dietrich

June 2, 2014 at 8:57 PM

this is really nice, but have you tried to center it yet?? If you give me your email at soupmail, I will try to give you instructions in an email. When I use those same symbols in soupmail, it goes to ERROR and won't let me mail the soupmail. SO WEIRD.