On Meditation

Just close your eyes and be at rest.
Think not of things to do
or times that you were not your best.

Relax and you will find
awareness in your mind.

That is your prize!
Just close your eyes.

Give it a try; drift into peace.
Think not of gloom and doom.
Those kinds of thoughts you must release.
Let tranquilness find room.

Better you will feel,
when you’re being real.
That is the ideal.

Kiss frets goodbye.
Give it a try.

Dec. 10, 2022
for 'A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE no 54' Poetry Contest

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Sara Kendrick

December 12, 2022 at 2:51 AM

Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Just to get the mind cleared is not so easy. It does help a person relax though. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Valsa George

December 11, 2022 at 8:45 PM

This will definitely work ! Serenity will come to you to nest inside ! Beautifully expressed thoughts, Andrea !

Unseeking Seeker

December 11, 2022 at 7:25 PM

Great way to slip into a lucid dream with body resting and presence awake.

Andrea Dietrich

December 11, 2022 at 8:25 PM

yeah, I changed the title to what I think it really was about because i do not understand the other title I used!! I doubt I will fare any better with this in Brian's contest. haha