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On Marriage

The marriage road is full of bumps and many stones along the path, some small enough to pick up and slightly toss aside, others heavy as boulders each one a burden to weigh you down until you carry it to next clearing sometimes mile away but if you walk together mindful of the rocky places, though you may stumble you will not fall into the traps that lie in the shadows.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/19/2011 9:26:00 PM
This is wonderful analogy, Audrey. Are you the old Audrey or the new one I heard about?
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Date: 1/19/2011 9:41:00 AM
awhhh...heart tugging, mesmerizing work, audrey... love is a verb!! beautiful! ;) huggs, nette
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Date: 1/19/2011 9:02:00 AM
i fell into one of those traps and could not get out. but i still hope dispight my pass losses,, to get on that road again. john
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