Get Your Premium Membership

On Losing My Friends

A fog moved in as we floated on a raft in the middle of a licorice ocean and friends began dropping off into the sea swimming towards land I could not see and I wanted to go with them but I was afraid and then I tried but something held me back and plunged me from the raft onto the bottom of the ocean were I stayed for awhile drowning until a molasses fog wrapped itself round me and we floated slowly to the surface huddled together mourning, waiting for morning to come.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/14/2021 6:06:00 AM
Hello Betty Robunson, I know what it is like to lose a friend in death. 3 years ago I lost a friend. Now just recently I lost another, god took her home. I talk to tem in prayers. Enjoy your day my friend.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/13/2021 2:04:00 PM
A sad one.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/14/2021 4:58:00 PM
Are the things you describe in this write symbolic of anything? This is fanciful and imaginative.
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs