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On Life's Dance Floor

On life’s dance floor, the wanderer carries what the rooted partner cannot, while the rooted gives the wanderer reason to wander. Between waggle and wallflower, the bearing and the bloom, the sweetness, want and need, must succumb to life's errand. Distance arouses desire to sustain, meet and replicate. Both know the dance and the need to greet, join in, and embrace with a twirl and a kiss.

the bee takes the floor—
a wiggle, waggle, pivot, feint,
with a crooked promenade charting bearing and distance to sweetness.

at the edge of the floor
the wallflowers wear their best finery—
rooted in place, petals flung open wide, pollen the prize.

one dances by moving, one prances staying still—
somewhere between
the waggle and the wallflower
life changes partners.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Smith  Avatar
October 7, 2026 at 8:38 PM
The dance metaphor beautifully unites form and content: the lively opening movements give way to the poised stillness of the wallflowers, while the varied line lengths echo that contrast. “Life changes partners” is a lovely closing turn, gathering movement, desire and renewal into one graceful phrase. The slightly whispered, husky voice really gives the music a listen to again feel.
Anderson Avatar
October 8, 2026 at 12:15 PM
Thanks one again for your profound comment, feedback and kind thoughts. I really appreciate your efforts and input which is inspiring and a prompt for us all to do more comments!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 7, 2026 at 4:13 PM
the wallflowers wear their best finery— rooted in place, petals flung open wide…enjoyed very much!
Anderson Avatar
October 8, 2026 at 12:16 PM
Thanks very much Kim. I am so glad you liked it! Cheers and Best Wishes
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