On Life By the River

To the shy hamlet vivid are the hardships of last year,
How the brazen river had surged in—ravishing, moulding,
Branding beyond repair. And yet, when the summer air hums
In the hush before rain, once again, on the crumbling fields
Rancid memories give way to emerald reveries.








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Date: 24 / 11 / 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Zubair Avatar
December 3, 2016 at 1:10 PM
The meaning of it all that its mobility exudes life, the moment it becomes stagnant heralds its death. A superb quill
Kundu Avatar
December 3, 2016 at 7:04 PM
Yes. :) Thank you for reading, Samiha!
Stebbings Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 5:58 AM
Congratulations on your win, Tamal. Vivid picture you paint. I like the visual imagery in 'brazen river'. Barry
Kundu Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 10:00 AM
Thanks Barry!
Bhurani Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 4:33 AM
Lovely portrayal .....congratulations
Kundu Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 5:07 AM
Thanks Rizwana!
Neumann Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 12:59 AM
Great emerald reverie. Congratulations and wishes, Kai
Kundu Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 2:34 AM
Thank you, Kai!
Leiser Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 10:32 PM
Loved the descriptive elements in your fine poem, Tamal. Congrats on your win :)
Kundu Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 11:31 PM
Thank you. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 6:49 PM
Lovely, Tamal! Congrats!
Kundu Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 6:55 PM
Thank you, Kim!
Allison Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 6:41 PM
you painted a very vivid picture Tamal congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Kundu Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 6:53 PM
Thanks Jan!
White Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 12:02 AM
Beautiful entry. That contrast between taking and giving life. Good luck in the contest!
White Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 1:10 AM
Coming back to you with congratulations. It is well deserved!!!
Kundu Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 12:21 AM
Thanks Darren!
Dietrich Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 7:48 PM
a stunning final line, Tamal. Love that imagery.
Kundu Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 11:52 PM
Thank you, Andrea :)
Dutta Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 12:17 PM
Wish you best for contest. Where do you stay?
Kundu Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 12:35 PM
Thank you. :) To you as well.
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