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on landing

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On Landing

On the landing, porch boards turn to prow.
The moon bends down to kiss the bow.
With a leap over the bow, the maiden voyage ends—
Solid ground becomes place for newfound friends.

On landing, feet forget the restless sea,
And find what they were made to be.
Verandah, boat, moon and stone—
Each threshold strives to feel like our own.

We jump the bow, cross the threshold
with something new, true-blue bold.
From porch to prow, from sea to land,
We make our entrance, proud and stately grand.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Reese Avatar
April 30, 2026 at 2:32 PM
Very nicely done. Excellent rhyme and meter wonderful word choices as well it really paints vivid pictures in my mind of both land and sea. I hope you have more this good
Anderson Avatar
April 30, 2026 at 3:43 PM
Thanks very much for your kind words. Best wishes for you Cheers
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