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On Holidays

Overwhelming need grips my very heart Navigating scenic beauty and ease my mind Hazy and nebulous, I do feel right now Only for an idyllic rural life I will wow! Landing at wonderful alluring shores I yearn to wander beauties never seen before Drops of serenity shall rain into my soul Appeasing a daze and letting be a whole Yearlong of hectic schedule hard to bear Sovereign holidays I now deserve, that's fair! July 14th, 2018 Note : I will be away for a time.. I will miss all of you, your reads, beauties and comments.. Grateful to you all.. Stay safe and blessed always.

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/5/2019 11:09:00 PM

Hi soul sister hope you had a relaxing time during this holiday , you sound as if you needed it. Were you at this destination or thinking of going to it so that so "that drops of serenity could rain into your soul? Beautiful words. Lots of love and hugs, Jennifer.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/4/2018 7:32:00 PM

Beautiful, I love: "Drops of serenity shall rain into my soul"; this is especially beautiful.

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/23/2018 10:03:00 PM

Lovely said, Besma...have a great holiday my friend...see you back soon...love & light...^WW^

Sneha Rv

Date: 7/18/2018 12:55:00 PM

How beautiful, this poem is a picture! Have a lovely holiday :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/15/2018 3:48:00 AM

What good a few more drops would do my dearest friend when you alteady possess an ocean of serinity ? May your unending quest for knowledge add some more nuggets of wisdom and make you richer. God bless you. Look forward your returning dearest, Besma! Heavenly write!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/15/2018 12:43:00 AM

Enjoy, we all need to re charge our batteries, I loved this poem!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/14/2018 5:39:00 PM

A lovely acrostic Besma, I do wish you a happy and relaxing holiday and look forward to your return. Tom

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/14/2018 5:28:00 PM

Enjoy the time off Besma..you took us on your wonderful journey with this poem..scenic and serene..enjoy the peace and quiet--see you soon!