On Halloween Night

We approach the house, to trick-or-treat, but wonder if we dare
The porch is dark, no light or spark, to help us find the way
We peek inside, ........does the old man hide?  We see no one is there
But, we rang the bell, and wait a spell, the door begins to sway

Through the crack, pursued, a room is bare with unclad shades of gray
Arthritic winds have tossed us in, with a wretched dismal hand
The trees bend low, against the house with solemn loathing dread
With branches, brisk, it rattles glass, against the window pane

We look around the cheerless room,  a terrible scent of wrong
An angled light has slithered in, with shadows deep and long
and spotlights what's become of him, the man who isn't there...
with a room unkempt, some muffled steps, and as if a ghost might stare
 
Four vinyl seats, Formica clad, a room that needs repair
The table set, a plate of food, is rotting by the chair
A cup of cold, a cigarette, still smoking in the air
The room depicts, what might have been, but reeks with wrought despair

A parakeet within a cage has mocked us once again
The voice is shrill, it squawks with rage, 'Unlock me if you dare!'
The floor is strewn with littered seed, where mice have shared the spill
All time has stopped, in ash and dust, the hours couldn't care.......

We take a breath, too scared to move, for we are not alone
For company, a skeleton, sits beside the sofa's edge 
against the wall, it smiles at us beneath the window ledge
No eyes to stare, yet seems surprised...as if a joke is played

Inaudible, just barely heard, the wind begins to howl
Or is it we, who scream to be back home in Mommy's arms
Outside the house, we hear an owl, and we begin to run
into the night, into the light, without a bit of fun!
No Snicker Bars, no Tootsie Pops, no candy corn or Mars
A trick on us, no treat it was......we've lost our appetite!!



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For Contest: Halloween Night
Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Johnson Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 8:33 PM
Congrats Carrie. Good job. "We've lost our appetite". Great ending. Curtis
Onclaud Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 11:07 AM
carrie, you always amaze even when it's about somehting horrific!.. big congrats and huggs
Nusker Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 3:24 AM
A very engaging scary story you have built in this one. Congrats on your win with this fabulously spooky poem.
Roper Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 9:34 PM
Iove your imagery congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
Negron Flores Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 7:45 PM
Congratulations Carrie on the placement of the contest.
Scars Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 3:40 PM
wow what a story told here Carrie! congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
A  Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 2:48 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your own favorite Halloween Poem. Take Care **SKAT**
A. Sharma Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 11:37 PM
Awesome write n win Carrie! Big congrats!
Godwin Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 6:11 PM
Your creative poem is so well written that I stood in that room with them and I was a-scared ... CayCay
Eastman Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 4:38 PM
Thank You for entering my contest with your Halloween poem. A true Halloween tale with great imagination.
Sirak Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 7:08 AM
Now this is a Halloween tale! Your descriptions are amazing.
Gibson Avatar
September 5, 2014 at 4:00 PM
I love this, Carrie. You do so well with spinning a tale. I have not been able to get into this one yet. Best wishes in the contest.
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