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August. 22.2023

I am Looking at the Haiku in the Mirror Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Matt Caliri

gripping images lucid word art on paper~ loquacity barred

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2023 2:40:00 PM

oh yes, great closing line.

Paige Hind

Date: 8/22/2023 2:02:00 PM

Really cool look at haikus!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/22/2023 1:01:00 PM

Very nice!

Speaks Volumes

Date: 8/22/2023 9:57:00 AM

No conversation entered into. A terrific Haiku. Last line steals the show. Well done Valsa. This will do well in the contest. BOL

Tom Woody

Date: 8/22/2023 7:07:00 AM

Ha! Loquacity barred. I like that. Of course, some will write multiple haikus in succession, but we shan't count that. Very nice

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/22/2023 5:00:00 AM

Yes, just read and enjoy no talking necessary. Thanks for sharing this tidbit with us. I appreciate the visit to my page. I like the word loquacity. Thanks for sharing it. Sara

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/22/2023 4:37:00 AM

Perfect for the contest Valsa Good luck. Tom