On Haiku

gripping images
lucid word art on paper~
loquacity barred

beautypoetryriddlehaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

August 31, 2023 at 2:40 PM

oh yes, great closing line.

Paige Hind

August 22, 2023 at 2:02 PM

Really cool look at haikus!

Kim Rodrigues

August 22, 2023 at 1:01 PM

Very nice!

Speaks Volumes

August 22, 2023 at 9:57 AM

No conversation entered into. A terrific Haiku. Last line steals the show. Well done Valsa. This will do well in the contest. BOL

Sara Kendrick

August 22, 2023 at 5:00 AM

Yes, just read and enjoy no talking necessary. Thanks for sharing this tidbit with us. I appreciate the visit to my page. I like the word loquacity. Thanks for sharing it. Sara