On Guy Fawkes Day

The
bonfire's
flames crackle,
burning some wood.
The air's filled with smoke.
Fireworks that soar
bang and whoosh.
It's so
good!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 6:05 AM
Back with congratulations on this winning work in Andrea's contest. I enjoyed reading it. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K
Fowler Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 2:38 PM
I can picture it Jack - fun! Congratulations! :)
Callus Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 1:16 AM
Congratulations on your fine win with this poem that appeals to our senses, Jack. Hope life is treating you well, my friend. ~ Regards // paul
Dietrich Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 8:39 PM
Boy that sure seems to be England's highlite of November. Congrats, Jack. Wish I had time to do emails but I just have so much going on this week off. Sure hope I have time to put up the new tree I bought after last Xmas!
Kendrick Avatar
November 11, 2023 at 7:15 AM
Glad that you enjoyed Guy Fawkes Day. Everyone needs their day in remembrance don't they. Thank you for sharing this creation with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
Allison Avatar
November 11, 2023 at 4:52 AM
good one Jack we watched a display with friends on 4th Nov:-) hugs Jan xx
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