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I have deviated from the strict Iambic Pentameter and used only 9 syllables for the second , sixth, and tenth lines.  I figure if Shakespeare could get away with it .... 

On Growing Older Than I Am Alas, this growing older than I am drained me of the will to search for more my life consumed incessantly with spam I stood a vagrant beggar at the door naked beneath the trappings of old skin gazing through windowless cloudy past as life, I’d truly love to live again, roams freely through the shadows I have cast So as I stiffen now inside this crate hear sad footsteps slowly mark my fate I must admit I never made this date nor planned to leave the party quite so late Thus, in the silence, I shall take my leave dream of the life I lived and will not grieve. 4/22/2017 submitted to – YOU 20 Years From Now – Poetry Contest

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Date: 5/31/2017 7:59:00 AM
The thing about life is that none of us is getting out alive. Congrats on a fine win.
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Date: 4/27/2017 5:20:00 PM
I hope this wins the contest. great write.
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Date: 4/22/2017 1:52:00 PM
Love this sonnet Shakespearean deviations and all. A Fav! Hope it brings you good luck for the contest. All The Best, armand.
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John Lawless
Date: 4/23/2017 6:31:00 AM
Hey Maurice, very nice to hear from you and with a "Fav" my day is made.
Date: 4/22/2017 12:03:00 PM
Excellent pen John. 7 & good luck in the contest :)
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John Lawless
Date: 4/23/2017 6:29:00 AM
thanks Maureen for the high mark and for your support

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