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On Golden Ponds

Sail with me my darling! Let’s ride on golden ponds, Our summer times are ending Winters far too long Twilight years are mooring Memories floating high, Hand in hand we’ll travel Through sunsets beyond the sky Guided through every ripple Destiny in our eyes, Love will always remember, Years that had drifted by, Boat rides will continue, In tomorrow’s paradise, There we’ll see the Loon birds, Kiss our final goodbye, We’ll ride this final journey, As we start to wonder why, All our beautiful memories Never to say goodbye Only to kiss eternity, On golden ponds, we die. 04/06/16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/20/2016 8:23:00 AM
Wow, simply a beautiful poem. What a pleasure to read.
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 6/27/2016 2:08:00 PM
Thank you Scott for your comment sorry it's a bit late I don't get alerts x
Date: 6/9/2016 3:58:00 PM
A very good write, Wendy. Memories that are made from the heart or the hardest to let go when we loose someone we love. Thank you for reading my "Midst of Calamities". Hugs Eve
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 6/11/2016 4:21:00 AM
Thank you xxx
Date: 6/8/2016 11:31:00 PM
this is really nice, WEndy. The man who opened this contest , I think his account is closed. I hope somehow this contest one day gets judged!!
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 6/11/2016 4:21:00 AM
Thank you Andrea xxx
Date: 6/8/2016 4:23:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Very good work for the contest..I can feel the emotion in this creation..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 6/9/2016 2:55:00 PM
Thank you Sara very kind of you x
Date: 6/7/2016 9:26:00 AM
This is such a beautiful poem, Wendy. You have captured the emotional feelings that lovely music brings to mind along with the theme of the movie. Maybe Craig will find a way to judge the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 6/8/2016 12:46:00 PM
Thank you Sandra I'm so sorry your not on soup anymore I'll miss you xxxx you have a wonderful heart God bless you xxxx
Date: 6/4/2016 2:18:00 PM
Lovely Weny, such a sense of calm contentment. Barry
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 6/4/2016 3:11:00 PM
Thank you barry x

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