On Getting Old

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I used to think my mother and I were very different, but the older I get, the more I think we were very alike.

My mother played solitaire, 
Dozens of varieties, 
With a miniature deck of cards
That traveled with her
When she visited her children.
She lived with me, but
She couldn’t hear well
And smoked a LOT, so
She stayed in her room 
A great deal of the time. 
She smoked and played solitaire,
Sitting by the window
At her cluttered card table.
 
Now I play spider solitaire
on my computer in my room.
I live in a senior residence, so 
I don’t spend as much time 
At it as my mother did.
I can choose to play Bingo
Or other card games 
Like Bridge or Pitch
Or sing in a little chorus.
I can go on an occasional trip.
My hearing is okay with
The hearing aids and I don’t smoke!
My children come to see me
But they don’t have me underfoot.
I have the best of both worlds.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 7/7/2023 6:56:00 PM
Carry on dear lady. You are a survivor! Take advantage of all the senior's home has to offer. Cheers, Brian
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Date: 6/6/2022 2:59:00 PM
Thanks for the comment. My mother and grandmother did our genealogy back to Charlemagne, I think, on about twenty different lines!
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Date: 6/7/2022 11:33:00 AM
But new records are being posted every day so you can firm up their accomplishment as well as add to it, e.g., findmypast.com ended yesterday a freebie to research British newspaper obituaries....Aloha!
Date: 6/6/2022 10:54:00 AM
Do genealogy as it will occupy your mind and provide your offspring with known health risks! Aloha!
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