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On Frozen Pond

As a wee one I was obsessed with hockey On frozen pond paying no mind to frozen bodies We pretended To be legends Scoring the winning goal, kinda cocky

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/11/2020 5:15:00 AM

play, play, play for the fame; but without goal do not destroy the name!

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/11/2020 6:26:00 AM

As a young lad, I lived and died hockey! LOL

Michael Tor

Date: 6/10/2020 4:47:00 PM

Hockey is a tough sport. Your a tough cookie Jack...

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/10/2020 5:51:00 PM

When I was a ten-year-old, I lived and breathed hockey! Canadian eh!!!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/10/2020 8:21:00 AM

A mans game for sure

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/10/2020 9:14:00 AM

Our national sport!!! Cricket anyone?

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 6/10/2020 7:15:00 AM

A true Canuck! Question is, are you a Leafs fan, or a Habs fan???? ;), xomo

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/10/2020 9:09:00 AM

A Domi fan... of course! LOL Popular guy! Let me tell you about the Habs! I lived and died with those guys as a youngster! They had a fabulous record! OOOOEEEE! XOX

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/10/2020 7:56:00 AM

Though I am a Tie Domi fan

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/10/2020 7:55:00 AM

Tee hee! I had my suspicions. I too am a fan of the Habs, Roch Carrier's "The Sweater" fit long before we had the Sens ;),

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/10/2020 7:44:00 AM

Habs all the way! Born in Montreal, Maurice "The Rocket" Richard my hero of heroes!!! I could be convinced to switch though... 45 years in Ontario! Love, Happy Jack XPX