On Frozen Pond

As a wee one I was obsessed with hockey On frozen pond paying no mind to frozen bodies We pretended To be legends Scoring the winning goal, kinda cocky
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Bangalee Avatar
June 11, 2020 at 5:15 AM
play, play, play for the fame; but without goal do not destroy the name!
Ellison Avatar
June 11, 2020 at 6:26 AM
As a young lad, I lived and died hockey! LOL
Tor Avatar
June 10, 2020 at 4:47 PM
Hockey is a tough sport. Your a tough cookie Jack...
Ellison Avatar
June 10, 2020 at 5:51 PM
When I was a ten-year-old, I lived and breathed hockey! Canadian eh!!!
Cunningham Avatar
June 10, 2020 at 8:21 AM
A mans game for sure
Ellison Avatar
June 10, 2020 at 9:14 AM
Our national sport!!! Cricket anyone?
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 10, 2020 at 7:15 AM
A true Canuck! Question is, are you a Leafs fan, or a Habs fan???? ;), xomo
Ellison Avatar
June 10, 2020 at 9:09 AM
A Domi fan... of course! LOL Popular guy! Let me tell you about the Habs! I lived and died with those guys as a youngster! They had a fabulous record! OOOOEEEE! XOX
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 10, 2020 at 7:56 AM
Though I am a Tie Domi fan
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 10, 2020 at 7:55 AM
Tee hee! I had my suspicions. I too am a fan of the Habs, Roch Carrier's "The Sweater" fit long before we had the Sens ;),
Ellison Avatar
June 10, 2020 at 7:44 AM
Habs all the way! Born in Montreal, Maurice "The Rocket" Richard my hero of heroes!!! I could be convinced to switch though... 45 years in Ontario! Love, Happy Jack XPX
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