On Friendship

-dedicated to and inspired by Awoh Kingsley-


To define a friendship Is to define each element held in a grand sea The moments shared between the water and the single fish The seaweed coursing in the shallow Sinking in the deep Through trust two can prosper And even be happy But when mistakes are made Trust becomes a demand A weapon to test each other Trust allows that seaweed to flow Trust can also allow the currents to bury them Without openness that trust will falter Like an underwater volcano Holding all the fire in It is bound to explode And though water will cool it somewhat There’s no telling how long the next explosion will take A friend should not take his time calculating that Instead allow words to flow Like the gills of a fish Allowing water in and out Cooling and moderating forever Filtering the bad into good Above all, love must reign For friendship cannot grow without it Without love There would be no elements in the sea The sea would be a bottomless pit Of nothingness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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January 13, 2014 at 9:59 AM
REALLY WELL WRITTEN AND THANKS FOR COMMENTING ON MY POEM
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January 9, 2014 at 12:01 AM
Beautifully done Laura! Striking imagery!
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January 6, 2014 at 11:32 AM
A beautiful homage to the most rewarding, and most arduous of all human virtues, love. I admire the oceanic analogy Laura. J.A.B.
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January 6, 2014 at 1:06 AM
A wonderious write my friend it has a sensitivity that is beauty itself. thank you for a great reading here i am come back another time to reread this again. when i dream tonight i may relive your words. cheri
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January 1, 2014 at 12:46 PM
Laura, I haven't been on site for a while. I apologize for that. Your poem is beautiful. It is a real art to express enough of the truth so that it may be accepted without so much that there is an explosion. This is an art I have not yet mastered. In any case, may you have a wonderful 2014 and beyond. Thank-you for being and being here.
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December 30, 2013 at 9:13 AM
Laura.. you define friendship on its finest!.. Very well said.. Happy New Year to you,,, I wish you a prosperous life ahead:'))
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December 30, 2013 at 8:02 AM
Great write very visual well done best wishes. Pete.
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