On Freedom's Wings

a chrysalis bursts
tiny veins pulsate with joy -
graceful wings take flight


16.03.19


Writing Challenge 2, March 2019 - Haiku- Poetry Contest
sponsored by Dear Heart
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La France Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 11:03 AM
Wendy, congratulations on your win in my contest with this fine haiku~
Watson Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 3:52 PM
Thank you, Dear Heart for setting the challenge.
Allison Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 7:15 PM
absolutely beautiful Wendy! many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Watson Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 3:53 PM
Thanks, Jan. From creepy crawly to beauty on wings - amazing.
Roper Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 6:51 PM
Great Haiku,Wendy, congratulations on your win. Happy Saint Patrick’s Day. Hugs Eve ~`*
Watson Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 3:53 PM
Thank you Eve as always for your encouragement.
Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 6:32 PM
this is very well done, WEndy. Congrats in the contest.
Watson Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 3:54 PM
I appreciate your encouragement, Andrea. Thank you.
Andresen Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 3:13 PM
- Very beautiful, Wendy :) - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Watson Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 3:54 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. Creation is amazing.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 1:48 AM
Beautifully done, Wendy. Sweet haiku!
Watson Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 3:56 PM
Thank you, Caren. To my shame, I hadn't heard of a haiku before joining this site!
Gauthier Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 12:03 AM
Lovely imagery, Wendy.
Watson Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 3:56 PM
Thank you,Line.
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