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On Faith

When darkness surrounds your skies Or a veil draws over your eyes It could be you’ll realise There’s something more When you’re caught in an endless night Where all hope seems out of sight Wishing with all your might There’s something more When the tide of time has crept Past the promises unkept Perhaps you will accept There’s something more When you reach life’s last demand Seeking that helping hand Maybe you’ll understand There’s something more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/8/2021 3:47:00 PM
Just came back to say thanks for your comment on my poetry. Hope you might write some new poetry for us while you are around!
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Date: 4/12/2021 9:57:00 AM
Simple and yet so powerful. As the old saying goes, when you hit rock bottom that's when we find ourselves. It's been a long time, my friend ... how have you been?
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Date: 8/20/2020 12:41:00 AM
One lives in hope, Richard, so please i've read this, Brilliant and to the point, Poetry.
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Date: 8/6/2020 9:21:00 PM
Agree Richard...now more than ever, devotions are my priority daily...take care my friend...
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Date: 6/24/2020 6:45:00 PM
I think someone recently had a Faith contest. I wish older poems like yours here could be used in these contests! So regarding the comment you made on my super long poem: (as a poster I once had said on it) above the picture of a lion on a throne: It's MY opinion and it's very very true. heehee. And I am not even a Leo!
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Date: 6/6/2020 3:22:00 AM
Hum, I wish we all understood... It gets better than this, I do believe there is something more. Richard, it's been a long time. However, I remember you... always Linda
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Date: 5/15/2020 2:13:00 PM
This poem is wonderful Richard. Your message of understanding there is always faith We can call on transcends one to a higher spiritual path. I hope you are well. Blessings and Aloha, Connie xxoo
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Date: 4/8/2020 5:06:00 PM
Indeed there is more. Well expressed Rich.
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Date: 3/6/2020 3:12:00 PM
Lovely thoughts....brilliantly expressed.
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Date: 11/28/2019 3:58:00 PM
Ponderous verse! Enjoyed!
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Date: 11/23/2019 7:14:00 PM
Thanks for your sweet comment on my poem, Richard.
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Date: 11/6/2019 7:37:00 PM
this is REALLY nice, Richard. Thanks for posting a brand new one. A FaVE!
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Date: 11/2/2019 9:29:00 AM
Something more goes on and on...Good one Richard
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Richard D Seal
Date: 11/2/2019 8:32:00 PM
Thank you Arturo, on and on indeed
Date: 11/2/2019 9:18:00 AM
Fantastic penning Richard! An eloquent introspection.
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Richard D Seal
Date: 11/2/2019 8:28:00 PM
Thank you Maureen, for your very kind comment

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