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On Demand

I want you
On demand
I can't stand...
Delay
No way
Here...now
I want to play
Make me sway
all night
all day

You're on demand
Understand?
Command
upon 
Command
Hand clasped on hand
Band tightens band
On demand
Make me lie
Make me stand
As flesh you brand
With fiery strand
SO unplanned

On demand!!!!
Yes...I want you
On DEMAND

Roya

sexyrhyme

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

October 21, 2014 at 10:09 AM

So passionate... So powerful. LOVE.

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 20, 2014 at 5:46 AM

When the heart is filled with love, one is always ON DEMAND, dear Eileen! When the heart is empty no value is there if someone is ON DEMAND or not! Powerful poem!

Eileen Manassian

October 20, 2014 at 7:14 AM

Wisdom speaks. Thank you, my dear poet. You are always there to offer me guidance and understanding. Yes...Love...TRUE LOVE...needs to be there at all times, for only TRUE love will respond to such a call as this. Hugs

Justin Bordner

October 20, 2014 at 2:20 AM

Your crave, unwilling to be staved by song or promise played, only penetration into a body sweltering for heavenly melting will make a heart saved in euphoric concentration...impromptu love is good! "Hand clasped on hand, band tightens band..." Hot intensity, tight flow Eileen...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

October 20, 2014 at 5:13 AM

Thank you, Justin. You understand. I appreciate your insights into my work. Impromptu love....on demand....is very good, indeed. People would be surprised to know that the Bible does address this issue...Yes, of course, it is referring to the marriage setting. The author says that we are not to deprive one another of our conjugal rights, for our bodies are not our own. That is what most people fail to see...the sensual writes in the Bible...Song of Solomon...for instance. Oh well, let the world think what it will. I don't care anymore...Thank you for being there for me and for supporting me.

Andrea Dietrich

October 19, 2014 at 6:47 PM

ooh, you are a dominatrix!! Fun and sexy. I think you made a typo when you said "make my lie" Do you mean "me?" Let me see another one now.

Eileen Manassian

October 20, 2014 at 5:09 AM

Thanks, my dear. There are varying degrees of that in all of us, Andrea. Fun and sexy...that makes me feel good. Thank you for your visit and for the correction. I appreciate it.

Paul Callus

October 19, 2014 at 3:54 PM

Do not delete this 'demanding' write, Eileen. I enjoyed it, and it appears that others do as well. It is no secret that you get what you go after...and why not, since you have the power! // paul

Eileen Manassian

October 20, 2014 at 5:07 AM

Thanks, Paul....I appreciate your vote of support. We have different sides to our characters...loving and gentle, domineering and aggressive. Demanding what we want...Begging for what we want...It's all part of life's game. Those who claim not to be this way...Well, I have words to describe them, but I will not. Thank you...for your support. It comes at a good time for I am discouraged. Appassionata...that is my life, my dear. I fight my battles daily...with smiles...with tears...and I try to survive. Hugs

Ilene Bauer

October 19, 2014 at 3:31 PM

this is great, eileen! i bet this one just jumped out of you onto the page...

Eileen Manassian

October 20, 2014 at 5:00 AM

I really don't know where it came from. It's not a new concept for me, Ilene. ;) I just wanted to write this one and let it fly...It is the rebel in me....pushing against the limits. Thanks for reading.

Sebastian Aaron Baez

October 19, 2014 at 2:24 PM

Don't delete this, it was great, sounded very seductive to me. Nothing is sexier than a woman taking charge and getting what she wants. :)

Sebastian Aaron Baez

October 19, 2014 at 2:35 PM

Replies like that only arouse my curiosity...... :)

Eileen Manassian

October 19, 2014 at 2:33 PM

Finally...approval! I'm going to get told off for this one, but...while I'm getting my taste of success, I'll let it be. Dearie...was going to use another word, but...HA! Glad you got the effect I was going for, Sebastian.

Eileen Manassian

October 19, 2014 at 2:25 PM

hmmmmmmmm......hhhhhhhmmmmmmmm.....and THAT'S all I have to say to this one!

Tim Smith

October 19, 2014 at 2:23 PM

Haha...You do speak your mind when you want something...we love for that because that who you are...hugs

Eileen Manassian

October 19, 2014 at 2:34 PM

hmmmmmmmm......hhhhhhhmmmmmmmm.....and THAT'S all I have to say to this on

Brenda Meier-Hans

October 19, 2014 at 2:04 PM

Don't delete, it's to funny. I love it. Go girly girl.

Eileen Manassian

October 19, 2014 at 2:07 PM

Really??? HA HA HA HA! I was hoping for seductive, but...I guess funny will do. I guess that makes it more kosher! Thanks, Brenda. I'm a silly goose! I am! I am used to getting my way. It does frustrate me when I don't!! Temper Temper!

Charmaine Chircop

October 19, 2014 at 1:49 PM

Its nice to want need someone on demand.Somehow this poem transmits the power of a woman to get what She wants,when She wants it.You rock.girl!!!

Eileen Manassian

October 20, 2014 at 5:01 AM

This I didn't understand, Tristen. It's rather too graphic.

Eileen Manassian

October 19, 2014 at 1:52 PM

Will probably delete this in a bit. A bit much...I was in a MOOD when I wrote it. I grew up getting what I want. I guess I never got rid of that trait. ;) Take care, sweetie. Thanks for the visit.

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