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On Death

There comes a fascination with advancing years. A vantage point unique to view the shifting tiles of one complex mosaic made of overlapping lifetimes. Seeing all those lives, there are no words but those of wonder at an unvoiced challenge to relate, or to pronnounce design then shy away in impotence as science yields to mere mortality. Still, I keep returning for a look. I want to get to know this final act, try to build a friendship, and in a few short months or years to welcome its embrace. Already comes the news of its arriving...not the hour, But there is time remaining to spruce up a bit. A most illustrious visitor with one last gift is on the path, and no event preceding it can ever dim the splendor of its truth. ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/9/2012 5:05:00 PM
an interesting take on wanting to "build a friendship" with this "illustrious visitor." i'm hoping he passes by my doorstep, though - i'm not ready to receive him. an excellent poem, though!
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Robert Ludden
Date: 7/9/2012 5:47:00 PM
Thank you. In my case, "he" is welcome when the time is ripe.
Date: 7/9/2012 3:24:00 PM
deep thoughts expressed, your writing has great flow...your poetry reminds me of someone but the name escapes me, can't think who it is...please "keep returning for a look" :-)
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Robert Ludden
Date: 7/9/2012 5:49:00 PM
Thank you. I certainly shall. I am always rewarded when I do.

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