Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Sedoka

On Cloud Nine - Ws

In sunless dark dusk
winter blizzard blows across
the road I walk chilled back home.

Cupful hot coffee
my wife gives me at fireplace,
we’re on cloud nine together.

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January 13, 2023
Syllable count : 5 7 7 (HMS)
Contest : Winter Sedoka
Sponsored by : Charles

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Sara Kendrick January 26, 2023 at 6:22 AM I wanted to drop by to say congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Paula Goldsmith January 25, 2023 at 8:49 AM Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful write with a great ending. Have a great day.............. Subimal Sinha-Roy January 25, 2023 at 10:07 PM Thank you.

Charles Messina January 25, 2023 at 5:26 AM Lovely write, Subimal. Loved the last line! Congratulations on your placement in my contest. Charlie Subimal Sinha-Roy January 25, 2023 at 10:06 PM Thank you, Charles for the placement.