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On Christmas Day

If I have the time, dear- on Christmas Day, I will visit your frosty engraved name; and will kiss your photograph in the frame, and weep and pray over the place you lay. But, Christmas Day is so much brighter now, over the years I have collected friends; and with them under my wings love extends, I have a great tree with lights on each bough. Will be with sister and brother this year, and their spouses and all their super kids; I cannot eat sweets- my doctor forbids, oh, how I wish you could be with me dear. I cherish the sweet memories of us, but, I have made new beautiful ones too; nowadays- I am not everyday blue, yes, darling how I miss your soft caress. Oh, let me put my deep sorrow away, for it is now time for Christmas and love; God took you home on the wings of a dove, be still- ever will your memory stay. _____________________________ December 17, 2019 Poetry/Enclosed Rhyme/On Christmas Day Copyright Protected, ID 19-1209-521-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, If You Have The Time For An Enclosed Rhyme sponsor, Tania Kitchin Fourth Place
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January 12, 2020 at 4:04 PM
Hi BW, Congrats on such a heartfelt and well written verse.Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
La France Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 2:45 AM
Alexis, thanks so much for the comment and the congrats !
Kitchin Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 6:00 AM
Constance, congratulations on your winning placement with your well penned heartfelt poem!
La France Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 2:46 AM
Tania, thanks so much for another inspiring contest and for my placement, appreciate !
Krutsinger Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 5:28 PM
Beautifully done, as usual, Constance. Your poetry always takes a little piece of my heart.
La France Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 8:29 PM
Caren, thanks for your kind words, each poem keeps a piece of my heart too !
Michael Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 1:00 PM
Keep the good memories...and honor as often as you can but most of all Live today...
La France Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 8:30 PM
Arturo, thanks for visiting, I used to try and push the memories away but now I embrace them.
May Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 12:47 PM
Amazing!
La France Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 8:31 PM
Bobby, thanks for visiting with the amazing !
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