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If I have the time, dear- on Christmas Day, I will visit your frosty engraved name; and will kiss your photograph in the frame, and weep and pray over the place you lay. But, Christmas Day is so much brighter now, over the years I have collected friends; and with them under my wings love extends, I have a great tree with lights on each bough. Will be with sister and brother this year, and their spouses and all their super kids; I cannot eat sweets- my doctor forbids, oh, how I wish you could be with me dear. I cherish the sweet memories of us, but, I have made new beautiful ones too; nowadays- I am not everyday blue, yes, darling how I miss your soft caress. Oh, let me put my deep sorrow away, for it is now time for Christmas and love; God took you home on the wings of a dove, be still- ever will your memory stay. _____________________________ December 17, 2019 Poetry/Enclosed Rhyme/On Christmas Day Copyright Protected, ID 19-1209-521-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, If You Have The Time For An Enclosed Rhyme sponsor, Tania Kitchin Fourth Place

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Date: 1/12/2020 4:04:00 PM
Hi BW, Congrats on such a heartfelt and well written verse.Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Constance La France
Date: 1/15/2020 2:45:00 AM
Alexis, thanks so much for the comment and the congrats !
Date: 1/12/2020 6:00:00 AM
Constance, congratulations on your winning placement with your well penned heartfelt poem!
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Date: 1/15/2020 2:46:00 AM
Tania, thanks so much for another inspiring contest and for my placement, appreciate !
Date: 12/17/2019 5:28:00 PM
Beautifully done, as usual, Constance. Your poetry always takes a little piece of my heart.
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Date: 12/17/2019 8:29:00 PM
Caren, thanks for your kind words, each poem keeps a piece of my heart too !
Date: 12/17/2019 1:00:00 PM
Keep the good memories...and honor as often as you can but most of all Live today...
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Date: 12/17/2019 8:30:00 PM
Arturo, thanks for visiting, I used to try and push the memories away but now I embrace them.
Date: 12/17/2019 12:47:00 PM
Amazing!
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Date: 12/17/2019 8:31:00 PM
Bobby, thanks for visiting with the amazing !

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