Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

On Break

If heaven is our home
the cosmic realm
where we come from
and return
this would mean…

that by default…
our life here on earth
is actually us
deciding to
take a break
from heaven

now…
is it just me
or
is that not
the oddest
most mindblowing
concept
you ever heard         



AP: 2nd place 2021

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Sandra Adams February 14, 2020 at 8:09 PM interesting thoughts, if it is true, what were we thinking to leave such beauty and come here? perhaps we were made to come here to learn about pain and suffering to truly appreciate heaven... Happy Valentine's day Line... liked this one :) hugs Michelo Mweetwa February 15, 2020 at 6:53 PM Another nice way to put it! Line Gauthier February 14, 2020 at 10:05 PM You've got it, Sandra. Thanks for your lovely visit.

Kim Rodrigues February 14, 2020 at 3:23 PM A vacation from heaven that we will never want again. Great thought. Line Gauthier February 14, 2020 at 4:00 PM It's like saying I'm too happy and need a break. LOL

Arturo Michael February 14, 2020 at 2:23 PM Nothing surprises me anymore...if you have it right then this experience much be special despite the suffering, of which is blatantly obvious...one that we can't experience in heaven...a poem of wonder Line Gauthier February 14, 2020 at 4:00 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Arturo.

Sanjay Karmakar February 14, 2020 at 12:30 PM Wonderful writing on philosophical thought. Many good luck dear poet. Regards. sk Line Gauthier February 14, 2020 at 4:01 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sanjay. Most appreciated.

Robertina B. February 14, 2020 at 11:33 AM Yes Line, very mindblowing.. Enjoyed your lovely And profound write! Have a blessed Valentine's Day! Line Gauthier February 14, 2020 at 4:01 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Robertina. Much appreciated.

Julie Achilles February 14, 2020 at 3:38 AM See you there- Regards Julie Line Gauthier February 14, 2020 at 9:37 AM Absolutely, Julie. We will meet again.

Michelo Mweetwa February 14, 2020 at 1:30 AM Mind blowing and thought provoking Line Gauthier February 14, 2020 at 9:36 AM Thanks, Michelo.

Quoth Theraven February 14, 2020 at 12:49 AM Line, What a break it has been. -Richard Line Gauthier February 14, 2020 at 9:36 AM Yes for sure, we have to make the most of it.