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for Julie Leigh Rodeheaver, Hobbies Poetry Contest, 2/24/2019

I remember when birds were just plain birds, and ducks were the birds that swam in the lake. Binoculars were tools for seeing ballet; heavy, clumsy, hard to control focus. Once taught to listen for the call, cheep, bzzt, and search in the direction for motion I never went back to being blind, lost to flutters, fannies, eye rings, and beaks. Color important as well as tree limbs. Flight patterns, wing shapes, up and down were a nuance to food, romance, and love because you loved the sight and shape, song, and ever elusive arrival friend somewhere, mountain, jungle, graveyard or beach someplace new to join together on hunt to wipe out work time thoughts and hidden pain and love the world we live in for each bird through the short days of our lives on the wing.

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Date: 3/29/2019 7:43:00 AM
Your poem is sure to inspire the poetic soul in those who relate to seeing through a poet's eyes. I love how you speak in the language of every tender heart. A fave for me Sheri! Brilliantly composed. : )xxoo
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Date: 2/24/2019 11:46:00 AM
This is a FAV for me, Sheri. I love my birds, and can see that you are crazy about them also.
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 3/15/2019 4:04:00 PM
Thanks so much Caren, I'm glad to find you love the birds, too!
Date: 2/24/2019 9:15:00 AM
This is wonderful Sheri! I can wholly relate. Addicted to birding ;) it is amazing how much more you see with practice, pattern recognition. My best to you in the contest, already a winer for me :) xomo!
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 3/15/2019 4:04:00 PM
Thanks so much Maureen, it is true, glad to see you know about birding
Date: 2/24/2019 6:41:00 AM
So beautiful! I love the movie “The Big Year” about birding. I went to Alaska, took a small boat cruise and had a serious birding experience. The life of a poet’s the best with our eyes on every nuance of creation! Be blessed!
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