On Bended Knee

Joy
Tears fall
smile appears 
What a surprise
Yes!



Attempting a new style.
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Nance Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 10:01 PM
Yes! that is such a happy word and a thrilling poem :) brings big smiles :)
A   Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 11:34 PM
Reading this one again...cheering you on.... I read the soup mail :-)... Im... talking to my sister right... I will be back tomorrow afternoon... thank you always... and for the win... I'm glad I took the time to fix the syllable...Linda
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
November 23, 2012 at 2:56 PM
Lanterne! Wow! You're truly bringing light with this cute little piece, Rick! Great idea! Blessings, Hanitra
Lamoureux Avatar
November 23, 2012 at 3:12 PM
Why thank you Hanitra. Any more questionku's ?? Do you have a thanksgiving day celebration this time of year?
A   Avatar
November 21, 2012 at 9:38 PM
Richard,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
Horsman Avatar
November 21, 2012 at 8:29 AM
you must have read one of Jack Ellison's poems i did..then i read this beauty...
Ellison Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 4:35 PM
Bright, upbeat, cheery... what more can I say! This style is a new one on me, but then most styles other than a quatrain are unfamiliar to me! LOL
Lamoureux Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 6:13 PM
I was on my way to learn about limericks and came accross this little pretty.
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