On Bended Knee

Joy Tears fall smile appears What a surprise Yes! Attempting a new style.

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Casarah Nance

Date: 8/20/2014 10:01:00 PM

Yes! that is such a happy word and a thrilling poem :) brings big smiles :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/11/2012 11:34:00 PM

Reading this one again...cheering you on.... I read the soup mail :-)... Im... talking to my sister right... I will be back tomorrow afternoon... thank you always... and for the win... I'm glad I took the time to fix the syllable...Linda

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

Date: 11/23/2012 2:56:00 PM

Lanterne! Wow! You're truly bringing light with this cute little piece, Rick! Great idea! Blessings, Hanitra

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/23/2012 3:12:00 PM

Why thank you Hanitra. Any more questionku's ?? Do you have a thanksgiving day celebration this time of year?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/21/2012 9:38:00 PM

Richard,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/21/2012 8:29:00 AM

you must have read one of Jack Ellison's poems i did..then i read this beauty...

Jack Ellison

Date: 11/20/2012 4:35:00 PM

Bright, upbeat, cheery... what more can I say! This style is a new one on me, but then most styles other than a quatrain are unfamiliar to me! LOL

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/20/2012 6:13:00 PM

I was on my way to learn about limericks and came accross this little pretty.